Faded

I was here once 
But now I'm one of the forgotten ones
I faded away slowly
Imperceptibly 
Like the once vibrant blue of blue jeans
The edges frayed 
as I walked along the road of fleeting popularity
I felt my fabric thinning
until I became comfortable 
It made me kinda cool in a way
for I was worn almost every day
it felt better than okay
Paired with shirts and sweaters
until a time later other clothes seemed better
My holes became too noticeable 
instead of somewhat perceptible 
The day came
when I was sorta just a bit out of style
So you washed and folded me
carefully put on me on a shelf
After all I was a favourite
no one wants to throw a favourite away
Right there in the closet I stayed
Next to all the pretty new things
waiting 
until the day 
You might wear me again
But somehow
like sometimes
things just are what they are
faded old blue jeans
inexplicably disappear 
If you ever do find them
You smile and remember
how they made you feel
But sadly
when you try them on
they don't fit anymore...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Richard, this was great, I have some of those jeans, but guess what ripped jeans with holes are in style again, but the fit part is another story, loving this 7 (thanks for spotting the typo on my poem, my eyesight is not good)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Glad to help Constance.
Spagnola Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 11:45 PM
I just really love this one Richard:)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Thanks Jill.;0)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Oh Richard, you ended this poem so perfectly! A creative piece that I could totally relate to! #7 ; )
Lamoureux Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Thanks again Connie, hugs Rick.
Callus Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Hi Richard! In your capable hands Clothes & Metaphors combine perfectly! Well done, and congratulations on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Thanks so much Paul!
Dalei Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 3:09 AM
Best wishes n congratulations for POTD. Very wonderful write. I enjoyed every line. Well penned...........hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Thanks and hugs back to you Manmath.
Ashe Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Congrats on this POTD! This relatable on a few different levels! Now I want to see if some of my faded jeans fit! Nice write!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Thanks Walter!;0)
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Great write Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Hi James, thanks for the visit.
Manassian Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 4:16 PM
SO happy to see that you are POTD, Richard. :) You deserve it.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:37 PM
It was a nice surprise Eileen.
Haight Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 4:13 PM
I love your poem, Richard. We can all relate to the clothing, but the metaphors too! Congrats on Poem Of The Day! Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Thanks Sandra, i', pleased you like my poem.
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 2:38 PM
- That is something happening in a magic closets .... :))) .... it has happened to me many times, Richard :))) - Well done and congrats !!! - hugs // Sun :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Thanks Sunshine!
Rockwell Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Congrats on POTD!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 1:19 PM
This is a nice surprise! Thanks for reading it.
Dalei Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Richard, Congratulations on ur well deserved POTD. Very brilliant write. Well done...........hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Hi Manmath, thanks for the congrats.
Lane Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:39 AM
and now I see your jeans earned potd. Excellent, Rick. I knew this one was worthy.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 1:20 PM
You are kind, it is a nice Surprise.
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Great use of a metaphor - incidentally I have a pair of jeans from when I met my hubby and I still can get into them - a great feeling:-):-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 2:42 PM
- Your wife is too good at making delicious food :)))
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Good for you, sadly I can't say the same thing. When I met Mary I was 148 lbs now I'm 182 lbs. hugs back to you Jan.
Sergi Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Hi Richard: you captured the theme of faded jeans wonderfully.I think the word they use for old clothing nowise VINTAGE.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Vintage, much like myself! Thanks for visiting Ralph.
Smith Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Wonderful write Richard congratulations on POTD, well deserved...
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Thanks Charlie!
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 9:02 PM
I LOVE this one, Richard. I had a pair of jeans like this once!!! I put it away and now i can't even find it . I suppose it got trashed but I'd give anything to have it again because it was NOT worn out. it was vintage 1970's bell bottoms and would be so cool to use in programs that my ESL students put on when we study fashions of the past. Anyway, one of the best poems i read today.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 1:25 PM
You are sweet, thanks Andrea. I too had bell bottoms and mine had a button fly.
Hamilton Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 3:53 PM
I find you still fresh and vibrant, but comfortable can be good too! Nice write!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Thanks John, a very nice thing to say!
Spagnola Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Your use of metaphor in this piece is impeccable, your verse sings of the one constant, which is change. I think this is a beautiful display of your work that most anyone can relate to... and it is now a fav:), thanx, jill
Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Hi Jill, the site is doing weird things, my thanks to Tim seems to be multiplying. Thanks for the great comment.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Tim.
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Every once in a while we might try them on again but it just doesn't feel right anymore. Not as comfortable as we remember. I really enjoyed this one Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Tim.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Tim.
Lane Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Your personification of blue jeans makes me want to dig deeply into my closet before those favorite jeans no longer fit. This is as cool and those jeans, Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Thanks Lin, much appreciated.
Manassian Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:01 AM
You take an analogy and play it up to the max. Amazing write.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Thanks Eileen.;0)
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