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Facing Baptism Of Fire

While young, boldly go out To meet the baptism of wind Frost, rain and snow Practice a patient, open-minded Wise heart to save yourself Happiness will come in this world No one really help you Except yourself, striving for glory.

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Date: 12/19/2024 11:05:00 AM
Hello Hugol, It is not easy to be patient jut we must keep on trying. It is not easy to have an open mind. We must keep on trying. Much love here. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/21/2024 9:30:00 AM
Hello Hugo, Yes patience is a must wait for results for the things I am trying to experience. It is good that these form of fire will lead a person to become strong, resilient and overcoming heart, and warrior of its own. Your welcome. Love you lots /Darlene/
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 12/19/2024 7:37:00 PM
Yeah, you're right Darlene in your assessment. In trying is the first step to curiosity. This curiousness will lead us to discovery if we only have an open-mind to change and criticism. Patience is a must to wait for a result to the things that you have trying to experience with. These forms of fire will lead a person to become strong, resilient and overcoming heart, a warrior of its own if one may endure at the end. Thank you, Darlene for your comment. Love lots here./Hugo.

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