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There is this soul looks back at me each time I search the mirror who longs to change the man within to see the world much clearer ... He has a heart that's edged in gold though broken and neglected and sees love as the truth, untold the skill that's ne'er perfected. That same soul in the looking glass has more than just one face and one swims deep, the darkness with madness keeping pace ... That scoundrel gave the best of all he'd gained to poisons, rife and oft' danced with a demoness that nearly robbed his life. Still, there's another man to show his reflection in that glass with a gift of lighting words aglow of enticing souls en masse ... With the insight of his child's heart he forges songs and rhyme but all faces, three, he will impart 'til he's lost to dust and time. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Good Bad And Special About You" Poetry Contest, Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor. ~ Honorable Mention ~ in the "Strand Choice E, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/15/2020 3:46:00 PM
Wow, love this. Excellent write and win. Hugs
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Date: 3/14/2020 6:22:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for revealing these aspects of yours poetically. God bless you.
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Date: 3/14/2020 3:01:00 AM
Great work and congrats on your number 1 spot!! That is special :)
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Date: 3/13/2020 10:14:00 PM
Big congratulations, my friend. So well written, as you always do.
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Date: 3/13/2020 10:13:00 PM
Greg, your poem is so meaningful and beautifully and skillfully written, I like it a lot and congratulations on your first place win - Constance
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Date: 3/13/2020 10:02:00 PM
Great #1, congrats!
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Date: 3/13/2020 9:49:00 PM
Yes, you've truly got "a gift of lighting words aglow." Great take on the theme. I enjoyed reading (as always).
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Date: 3/13/2020 9:47:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win.Thank you for entering my contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/11/2020 2:29:00 PM
Greg, I sure love this self-portrait you paint, in all its honesty and modesty. There's a vulnerability that I love to see poets display when they are confident in themselves and their pen. My favorite lines (out of many great ones): "and sees love as the truth, untold / the skill that's ne'er perfected." Do keep blessing us with "a gift of lighting words aglow / of enticing souls en masse", for you are a very special poet, my friend ~ John
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Date: 3/11/2020 12:20:00 PM
I really like this poem, Gregory. Your concept brings to mind the song Man in the Mirror but with much more depth. Also your poem flows, like lyrics - hmmm. I love the reference to the wisdom of children. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/11/2020 11:01:00 AM
well done Greg a super entry for the contest:-) I found it a real challenge to write for the contest if it hadn't been for Lin I wouldn't have done a poem as I found it hard to write about me. your title made me smile I once had a boss we called 'the dodecahedron' she was a witch with a captial B! :-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2020 10:50:00 AM
Great rhyme and smooth flow Gregory, well done...
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