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Facebook Reunion Footles

He looks Facebook Her name!! Old flame! She wears!! new hair Redhead instead! Makes date She's late :( They greet "Let's....eat!" Converse... What's worse? He's bored :( "Pleeeeaze...Lord!!!" Gets dark No spark Goodbye.... He sighs They part sad heart Throws dice try twice???? :) He looks Facebook Inspired by Brian Strand's April footle contest

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/11/2009 4:46:00 PM

Is that a shape poem, too? Or just my imagination? Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/22/2009 6:45:00 PM

Dear Carrie, Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's APRIL fOOTLE I Read in Awesome Wonder as I have a hard time writing one let alone a series I Bow to YOUR POETIC Genius Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comments ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2009 4:05:00 PM

Thanks for allowing us to share this amusing date with you, Carrie! Love, Carolyn

Brandee Augustus

Date: 3/16/2009 1:22:00 PM

Very cute and true. Nice poem.

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/16/2009 3:01:00 AM

Carrie , this is an excellent piece of work ..Well done , again ....

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/15/2009 6:20:00 PM

Yeahhssss Carrie this was well deserved so fun!

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/15/2009 6:00:00 PM

This is cute and I know a few people that have been there and done that! Congratulations on your win! Smiles from Lolita

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2009 5:44:00 PM

This is so timely..it made me laugh..congrats on your win in this footle crazed contest. BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/15/2009 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brians's contest, Carrie! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/15/2009 1:14:00 PM

Warmest congrats Carrie on your excellent win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/15/2009 10:49:00 AM

This was great Carrie, I don't know how I missed it the first time around! I loved the series and how you brought it back to the beginning again at the end, superb. Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! :) Love, Amy

Brian Strand

Date: 3/15/2009 10:17:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my footle contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

Mary Duhart

Date: 3/10/2009 6:24:00 AM

Very cute and creative..Great write.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/9/2009 4:57:00 AM

Wow! Awesome job here Carrie! Love it! Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/8/2009 8:23:00 PM

Okay IM taking it for a fave

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/8/2009 1:44:00 PM

Carrie my dear neighbor you crack me up - God Bless, MJ

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/8/2009 12:53:00 PM

Yeahssss Carrie, sometimes its more fun talking in shorthand. This is so fun.

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/8/2009 9:13:00 AM

Super , souper , piece , Carrie ... Very well done .... Been There ...... Not Fair ... !!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/8/2009 8:46:00 AM

Excellent write, Carrie! Very funny and extremely creative! You go girlfriend! Love, Robin

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/8/2009 7:47:00 AM

That is funny Carrie.. I love the form of this....I love the story you tell with this form...Well done...FB is very interesting.. Meeting up with lots of friends from the past..

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/8/2009 7:17:00 AM

awww.Pictures say so much huh? well, personally I put my best pictures online... right now, going through an ugly stage (as metamorphosing into a butterfly can be difficult) trying to purify my body, mind and soul, I'll get there oneday, till then I have but images on photographic paper to go on... :) nicely written, can't say I haven't longed for a reunion cause I have. good job here, Cindy