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Face Without a Smile

face without a smile looked closely in the mirror and ran for exit November 5, 2017

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Valsa George

Date: 6/28/2022 9:01:00 PM

It is a moment we become strangers to ourselves and we hate to look on a face with no smiles..... ! A smiling face however ugly is so welcoming ! A great senryu !

Edward Mccall

Date: 11/28/2017 8:36:00 AM

This is too funny. Although I've done that once or twice in the morning.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/28/2017 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Edward!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2017 2:53:00 PM

One can hardly be recognizable in such a state!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/6/2017 3:59:00 PM

Powerful Senryu, Vijay. Running from the stranger within is a living nightmare for real. Very well expressed deep thought poetry. Love and smiles.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/6/2017 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Freddie!

Maria Williams

Date: 11/6/2017 6:48:00 AM

Your Senryu is too funny Vijay - Perhaps you need a better mirror - Ah I see -it was only your face that ' ran for the exit' - Love your poem. Thanks for sharing...Maria

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/6/2017 7:58:00 AM

Yes--just me Maria--you made me smile--many thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2017 5:31:00 PM

oh my, sounds like me when I see myself in my cell phone!!! I can't even take a selfie because it's so shocking to me, yet I don't feel so bad looking in a mirror!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/6/2017 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

John Fleming

Date: 11/5/2017 11:20:00 AM

Lol! :) Very cleverly executed, Vijay...love it. My best regards to you. :) john

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/5/2017 11:39:00 AM

Thank you john--appreciate your visit!

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/5/2017 10:17:00 AM

Can you blame the face, Vijay... Great concept...very visual... All the best

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/5/2017 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Arturo!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/5/2017 9:44:00 AM

Interesting Senryu Vijay. It reminds me of someone who does not want to look at the pain he or she may be feeling exhibiting in the face. Well done :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/5/2017 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Heidi!