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We only see what we want to see Reluctant to acknowledge what doesn't fit The safety of face value Not valuable or safe at all Look beyond my face And I'll look beyond yours Facades prevent depth of exploration There's a barrier, a false one But the pieces fit, don't they? I couldn't stand this close And not see you... Give me some credit All stated before the head on collision With the reality of knowing I could fall right through the construct No-one can be known Not even the knower Least of all the knowee All self exists only in the mind And the mind is held And accessed by an amateur Interpreted by a fool To dance a dance of willful deception By the willfully deceived Somewhere amongst it all Is a recipe for happiness If you don't open your eyes too wide Think a little less And don't question the glitches

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Date: 10/15/2023 11:23:00 AM
You are more than a match for my intellect Dilly, but perhaps not my Guinness prowess, I heard you mention before you can go 2 pints, I can go 4 lol!
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Date: 10/15/2023 11:59:00 AM
No way lol, free bars are great but a killer the next day, yeah those baby Guinness shots are very popular and pretty potent, I hang my head in shame, you beat me hands down!
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Date: 10/15/2023 11:38:00 AM
When it was a free bar I may have had 6 (and a baby Guinness shot). Pretty sure that's my limit though and I made sure I had a big tea before I went out that night lol
Date: 10/15/2023 6:46:00 AM
This picture reminds me of the TYS (thousand yard stare) afflicting soldiers in the Vietnam war, whom appeared to look right through people rather than at them, (all self exists only in the mind) yes it’s true at face value, but I often wonder if the energy our minds use to discern reality, spreads out unseen into the cosmic source as metaphysical information, sorry to digress, but your work here evokes such thoughts Dilly, cheers David
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/15/2023 7:02:00 AM
Thanks David, I always appreciate hearing how your mind fires in response to my musings - it would make a good pub chat until you realise I can't match your intellect haha. Maybe I'm a conduit lol. There's certainly something in what you say - different energy from people can be felt some distance away - who's to say how this all works. Thanks for your comment
Date: 10/14/2023 4:08:00 PM
A deep inquiry into reality. Thank you for a thought-provoking poem.
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/14/2023 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Hilda, it's a fascinating concept the idea of knowing people particularly when we can surprise ourselves with aspects of personality. Art is thrilling when you gaze at it and let your mind wander - thank you for your comment

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