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Face Ache

It’s a Face Ache
When your heart doth break, it shows in face ache Knowing ugly truth, he's found love anew. Lines in the brow show, round eyes crows feet grow Smiles from lips gone too, turned from red to blue. Stars from night sky fall, moon seems a dull ball Sun shines no longer, rain pours down stronger. It hurts when love’s gone, still thoughts linger on In dreams his queen’s you, you wake - it’s not true. Walk memory lane, draw love back again Remember the time, when your two hearts rhymed. The taste of his kiss, moments of pure bliss Could not be replaced, or gone without trace. Playing songs both loved, lost in wonder lust In a place for two, that only you knew. Wearing clothes you wore, your heart will be sore When face ache’s on view, blame it on déjà vu. 23rd April 2021 Writing Prompt - Ache - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France * * * *

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Date: 4/28/2021 8:54:00 AM
Bell, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your Rhyme poem, lost love does ache, well done, love _Constance
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/28/2021 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Constance it was a pleasure to take the challenge of writing for your contest, it’s good to come up with a poem that would never have been written, contests are good news for the muse. Love Belle
Date: 4/27/2021 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "Walk memory lane." In life that is all we have left. Have a blessed day.................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/27/2021 11:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula, I really appreciate your encouraging comments. Bless you, Belle
Date: 4/26/2021 4:06:00 PM
Hi Belle, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/26/2021 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, have a blessed day too ~ Belle :-)
Date: 4/26/2021 3:13:00 PM
So heart breaking, the ache you cannot just shake. Well penned, congrats!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/26/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Marilene, I like that “the ache you cannot just shake.” … Belle
Date: 4/24/2021 8:15:00 AM
Hi Belle, You've penned a good entry for the contest theme. Any ache isn't a great feeling. Especially the ache from a lover no longer there. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, when you ache all over it’s not great at all, enjoy the weekend too. Belle :-)
Date: 4/23/2021 7:49:00 AM
The ache of lost love is terrible, I had one such occasion, but then I found my treasure. Pity she passed on. A very intelligent poem.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/23/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thank you Victor, I know how much you miss your treasure and the love you shared together... Belle

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