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Mandy’s candies stock pile for while binge starts love hearts huge stock of choc Reece’s pieces coffee toffee gum drops from shops eats all … downfall fat tum big bum turnstile hostile ... (her a ss can’t pass) alert … tight skirt controls fat rolls skirt splits… the pits on scales loud wails its fate - gained weight Joins gym will swim diet try it! no chips or dips stops sweets and treats gets slim and trim lost weight looks great sweet tin in bin! 08/21/20

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/22/2020 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations, and thanks for the laughs! I have always been grateful my grandparents raised me in the years before snacks so I never acquired that habit as I have seen how it impacts others! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2020 8:32:00 AM

yes snacking so bad for you on top of a normal diet - good job we have poetry to keep our hands busy!:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt

Date: 8/22/2020 2:03:00 PM

What a great footle stream, Jan! A path I have trod often. I liked how you got around the censors on the 'can't pass' line! So many great rhymes and real-life occurrences. Congrats for your #1 with Brian! Hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2020 8:32:00 AM

to the brits ass is not a rude word lol:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/22/2020 3:41:00 AM

I like the fun footle. I kept expecting a gassy line lol Great job my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2020 8:30:00 AM

I've written quite a few footles i probably did a farty one knowing me:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2020 7:18:00 PM

LOve the ones, regarding the human anatomy..'fat tum, big bum' indeed,,brilliant, you are the sunshine, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2020 8:30:00 AM

thanks harry I love the footle form:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2020 4:27:00 PM

SO COOL, Jan, way to go with your footles!! Congratulations

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 4:35:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/21/2020 2:08:00 PM

Back with congrats Jan. Way to go, Our Jan On Man. Cant stop lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 2:19:00 PM

lol thanks Tom, I am gobsmacked as last time i submitted footles I got an n/a:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2020 1:16:00 PM

You can do these well Jan. I enjoyed them :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 1:18:00 PM

thanks Heidi I love the fun form:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2020 1:15:00 PM

Wow! What a footle. It's more like a 'Marathonel!' (Play on foot = 12 inches/30.54 centimeters). I can see why Brian was so impressed! Congrats on your top win in the contest, Jan! Cheers, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 1:17:00 PM

oh Wow i only posted them a short time ago, thanks for the good news GW:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 8/21/2020 1:00:00 PM

so it would seem you have the solution to the "Covid 15", that 15 pounds we're putting on while under house arrest

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 1:10:00 PM

lol John we are lucky been virus free but ive managed to have my daily walk most days when we were under lock down and got an exercise bike at a car boot sale the other week so i am still keeping trim:-0 hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2020 11:56:00 AM

- (((( : her a ss - can’t pass :)))) - Love all of them, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 12:02:00 PM

thanks Anne- Lise:-) it was fun to write... hopefully there will be no nasty comments about 'fat shaming' either:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/21/2020 11:42:00 AM

Loved following this footle from thin to fat, to diet and then fit again. Great!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 11:50:00 AM

thanks Kim it was fun to write:-) hugs jan xx

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/21/2020 11:28:00 AM

Love it! Brilliantly hysterical.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 11:35:00 AM

Thanks Joe, i adore this form:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/21/2020 11:21:00 AM

Love these Jan, im working on some now but ill wait a day or two , great minds eh. You're right, they're so addictive, It was Brian's creation, im sure he'll love these. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 8/21/2020 11:23:00 AM

I have submitted footles for him in the past and got n/a lol:-) hugs jan xx will drop by and read your footles too:-) really windy here I think the ferry aka the vomit comet has been cancelled for 2 days