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Autumn sheds her dress of glorious gold I shiver as it drifts gently to the ground Dry falling leaves cannot be controlled I adore their crunchy rustling sound Gold sunflowers bend their heavy heads as hungry birds peck at their shiny seeds they once brightened up the flowerbeds on their bounty the small birdie feeds Huge pumpkins grow out in the fields They resemble a huge lumpy tummy I adore the bounty that nature yields Eating sweet pumpkin pie is scrummy I dream of visiting New England I hear it’s just stunning in the fall I’d catch a plane it would be grand Autumn’s my favorite season of all Fall Into Fall Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cook 9/14/19

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Date: 9/24/2019 1:18:00 PM
- Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 10:30:00 AM
Jan congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:12:00 PM
Congrats Jan...a lovely poem.
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Date: 9/23/2019 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations Jan: A lovely fall poem which I felt was awinner. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:23:00 AM
Jan congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:16:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations and bless you :)
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Date: 9/19/2019 6:28:00 PM
A wonderful Fall poem, Jan: Full of the smells tastes and glorious shades that fall brings. Good Luck in the contest. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 9/19/2019 1:23:00 AM
So!Fabulous Fall. Wonderful. All the Best. Love.
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Date: 9/17/2019 6:43:00 PM
Hello Jan … as you enjoy the colour and bounty of autumn, new green shoots and blossom are colouring the countryside down here - well done again Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 9/16/2019 5:04:00 AM
- I never tasted pumpkin ... - a lovely picture of autumn, Jan - We like to harvest from nature ... now there is a lot of good mushrooms to find in Norwegian forests - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2019 1:40:00 AM
Your poem is beautiful and so filled with colors of autumn. I love it. Happy Writing and God bless you always
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Date: 9/15/2019 5:07:00 PM
A lovely autumnal piece Jan, so well penned highlighting the colours of the season. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 9/15/2019 3:23:00 PM
Your words blended color, texture, sound, and taste into a delicious poem!! Hope you are well.
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Date: 9/15/2019 12:30:00 PM
You depicted Autumn exactly as it should be and is Jan - I enjoy Autumn - it prepares us gently and prepares us for the onslaught of Winter - Autumn is a gentle friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/15/2019 9:03:00 AM
I absolutely love when I read a poem that inspires me to write better! Thank you!
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Date: 9/15/2019 8:43:00 AM
A yummy poem that honors fall and personifies her in a glorious way too Jan.
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Date: 9/15/2019 5:37:00 AM
Lovely verse Jan, its my favorite season too, seen pics of new England, looks amazing. Tom
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Date: 9/15/2019 5:24:00 AM
Love your Autumn Jan, not missing the chill though, here in Oz.
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Date: 9/15/2019 5:17:00 AM
Again you caused grace to eloquently blush with a splash of life in the intricate accounting that's definitely--Jan, with colorful descriptive outlines, conveys to readers that, --they have just the best! ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 9/14/2019 9:45:00 PM
Nice depiction of Fall, Jan... I think you can enter it in a second contest. How about the 'Fly into Fall' contest. Ha, ha. Just kidding, but yours sure would fit perfectly!! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 9/23/2019 8:15:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win in the ('first') contest. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 9/14/2019 9:34:00 PM
i agree with you 100%, jan, and yes, new england is amazing in the fall! i love your word choices here, especially the "scrummy" pumpkin pie...
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Date: 9/14/2019 8:54:00 PM
such cute imagery of the pumpkin, Jan. I wish you would visit Utah. It's like that here too in the fall.
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Date: 9/14/2019 8:14:00 PM
Well done, Jan! Aloha! Rico
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