Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Limerick

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Fab Holiday

planned once-in-a lifetime fab holiday, 
                   Suzie packed for amazing sun-kissed stay! 
                                 flashy bikinis in van, 
                               life's unbearable - must tan!
                    left poor hubby to sulk in great dismay!

            
                                     November 26, 2022
         "A Funny Christmas or December Holiday Limerick"  Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
                 Syllables (10-10-7-7-10) checked by HMS.com

                              For "Brian Strand" Poetry Contest
                                     Honourable Mention

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Valsa George December 11, 2022 at 7:36 PM Poor husband.... interesting tanka ! Congratulations, Mala !

Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2022 at 7:24 PM i really like this. Congrats, mala.

Linda Alice Fowler December 11, 2022 at 8:03 AM Haha Mala. Nicely written. Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick December 11, 2022 at 7:49 AM Back to say way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Congratulations. Sara

Christuraj Alex December 11, 2022 at 6:17 AM Great writing. Congratulations! Malabika Ray Choudhury December 11, 2022 at 6:29 AM Thanks, Christuraj. I always know the results from your comment. Warm wishes.

Sara Kendrick December 7, 2022 at 3:28 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest and a great way to enjoy winter. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Malabika Ray Choudhury December 8, 2022 at 10:07 AM Thank you, Sara. Glad you enjoyed.

Michelle Faulkner December 4, 2022 at 10:45 AM I would like to go somewhere sunny and warm! Also like the surprise on the last line~ Malabika Ray Choudhury December 5, 2022 at 9:58 AM Thanks, Michelle. Me too! Appreciate your visit and warm comment.

I Am Anaya December 3, 2022 at 3:45 PM Great punch-line, Malabika! Poor hub, may Suzie enjoy herself, she can sure use it! Lol Malabika Ray Choudhury December 3, 2022 at 4:02 PM Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your dropping in, and commenting - feel inspired. Love ~ Mala

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2022 at 1:07 PM haha. I enjoyed this! Malabika Ray Choudhury December 1, 2022 at 1:37 PM Thanks, Andrea. I am trying to write funny limericks! Ha ha!

Joanna Daniel November 30, 2022 at 7:42 PM Poor hubby, nice one, Mala:) Malabika Ray Choudhury December 1, 2022 at 1:35 PM Thank you, Jo. Hubbies are too pampered, right? Once in a while they need to be left by themselves.

Mystic Rose Rose November 29, 2022 at 9:02 PM lol, guess she is going to have a wild time, nice one Mala Malabika Ray Choudhury December 1, 2022 at 1:34 PM She is! I envy her, ha ha!