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Fab Holiday

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planned once-in-a lifetime fab holiday, Suzie packed for amazing sun-kissed stay! flashy bikinis in van, life's unbearable - must tan! left poor hubby to sulk in great dismay! November 26, 2022 "A Funny Christmas or December Holiday Limerick" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Syllables (10-10-7-7-10) checked by HMS.com For "Brian Strand" Poetry Contest Honourable Mention

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Valsa George
Date: 12/11/2022 7:36:00 PM
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Poor husband.... interesting tanka ! Congratulations, Mala !
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/11/2022 7:24:00 PM
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i really like this. Congrats, mala.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/11/2022 8:03:00 AM
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Haha Mala. Nicely written. Congratulations! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2022 7:49:00 AM
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Back to say way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Congratulations. Sara
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/11/2022 6:17:00 AM
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Great writing. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/11/2022 6:29:00 AM
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Thanks, Christuraj. I always know the results from your comment. Warm wishes.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/7/2022 3:28:00 AM
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Reads like a good contender for the contest and a great way to enjoy winter. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/8/2022 10:07:00 AM
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Thank you, Sara. Glad you enjoyed.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/4/2022 10:45:00 AM
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I would like to go somewhere sunny and warm! Also like the surprise on the last line~
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/5/2022 9:58:00 AM
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Thanks, Michelle. Me too! Appreciate your visit and warm comment.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/3/2022 3:45:00 PM
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Great punch-line, Malabika! Poor hub, may Suzie enjoy herself, she can sure use it! Lol
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/3/2022 4:02:00 PM
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Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your dropping in, and commenting - feel inspired. Love ~ Mala
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/1/2022 1:07:00 PM
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haha. I enjoyed this!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/1/2022 1:37:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea. I am trying to write funny limericks! Ha ha!
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 11/30/2022 7:42:00 PM
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Poor hubby, nice one, Mala:)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/1/2022 1:35:00 PM
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Thank you, Jo. Hubbies are too pampered, right? Once in a while they need to be left by themselves.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/29/2022 9:02:00 PM
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lol, guess she is going to have a wild time, nice one Mala
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/1/2022 1:34:00 PM
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She is! I envy her, ha ha!

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