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Eyes of Kaleidoscope

Kaleidoscope eyes A universe of change Round and round I go Unfolding- My spirit of envy and gold, The nascence of a new stone Hazel room, vibrant lilac sky, Deep orange haze in a tender place Arms of sapphire and cornflower blue Fuchsia beauty drip All colors drifted- The first day we met Visions of dark slate-gray Fade away Firing up the new age gem Turning and creating different stars Magic mint skies White antique petals follow the current of air Opal dreams, clouds embedded with impurity My heartbeat produces flashing colors The palest amethyst bluebonnet forever fields Flawless tear drop streams Diamond shaped love Ruby red promises to keep Flowing into the deep Every color spins new The day I fell in love with you Peridot lime green tint A love as old and gray Olive brownish sun Honeydew skin Our future, deeper than aquamarine Every day you turn fresh new seasons in me Changing the sequence in my colors and effect Kaleidoscope Eyes Reflect by the mirrors of you Crystallizing everything ---

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Date: 10/3/2016 9:11:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Linda. A bouquet of rainbow imagery. You are truly a talented poetess. I agree w/the other poets/poetesses. And such an impressive catalog of poems. This is my maiden voyage into your sea of prose. And I love to go on a pleasure cruise. Ty for inspiring me to strive to be a better rounded poet. Plus you know the various forms of poetry. I'm a novice in terms of knowing the diff styles. Love your work already. Much love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:41:00 AM
A stunning work, beyond the realm of colourful, kaelodoscopic in title, wording and imagery. My minds eye feels like a shattered rainbow after reading this, in a very unique and beautiful way. Thank you for sharing this Linda Rohan
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Date: 5/1/2016 9:06:00 PM
Love it. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/20/2016 5:45:00 AM
This is a masterpiece. This is my favorite. I love how this poem makes me feel. Keep writing!
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Date: 3/14/2014 6:11:00 PM
You make me remember my childhood; I loved Kaleidoscopes, very wonderful poem Linda
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Date: 11/13/2013 4:45:00 PM
Linda This is a very imaginative and charming write. The imagery and descriptive way you write those shows the reader how much love is in your heart. Nice job
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Date: 9/23/2013 9:09:00 AM
Hi, my dearest sis! Stopping by for a while to read once again 1 of my fave & 1 of the stellar masterpieces of yours. Embracing tightly the grace it gives 2 me this evening. Thank u so much. Sorry, i just came only now. Just came home. I went out w/ some friends for aerobics then dine out. Im coming back tom. ok. I want to thank you so much for the lovely comments on my poems, the smiles & warm thoughts. Biggest sweet hugs,smiles & kisses back @ u. Good nyt! Tcare. God bless! lovemuch4evr, Leo
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Date: 9/13/2013 3:53:00 PM
This is a very colorful picture that you have painted with your words! Very mesmerizing, I loved it!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. It means so much! :) By the way, I made a visit to your blog! :)
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Date: 9/7/2013 5:44:00 PM
Your descriptive poem is a delight!
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Date: 9/6/2013 11:10:00 AM
YOU WEAVED THIS PIECE VERY BEAUTIFUL
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Date: 9/1/2013 12:44:00 PM
Good poem ~Soup Mail~
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:43:00 PM
top notch stuff Poet
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Date: 8/2/2013 1:52:00 PM
Oh how i am so happy to have read this beauty, amazing poetry, Linda,,,
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Date: 7/30/2013 4:29:00 AM
Another outstanding poem, perfect in every way,,, imagery of colour just perfect,,, excellent my poet friend,,,, blessings and hugs sueellen
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Date: 7/28/2013 6:23:00 PM
Hi Linda Paloma, Your writings have a touch of magic within them.. Compositions that reach the soul... Ken...:)
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Date: 7/28/2013 10:48:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anybody would love this attention.
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Date: 7/28/2013 4:49:00 AM
...the day I fell in love with you...the day I fell in love with poetry.
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Date: 7/22/2013 10:06:00 PM
I really like it! My favorite part was, "magic mint eyes, white antique petals follow the wind, opal dreams clouds embedded with impurity." It sounds vivid and flows like a river on an endless course~! And random fact, I remember kaleidoscopes! They were fun toys and I am happy this poem was able to remind me of my childhood days ^_^ thank you.
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Date: 7/22/2013 12:29:00 PM
Hi! Linda -beautiful poem - also I like rhis stanza best - "Peridot lime green shade a love as old and gray olive brownish sun honeydew skin" ( Try that poem without ( The ) also Thank you for this post also instructions! Got it now! Perry Campanella
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Date: 7/21/2013 9:00:00 PM
Such a feast of colors. It flows and flashes so naturally. Thanks for your visits. They are always a great encouragement to me.
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:31:00 PM
I have only one word for this write beautiful. thank you my friend. love cheri
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Date: 7/20/2013 9:39:00 AM
this is awesome, PD. Hope you have a lovely weekend xx
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Date: 7/20/2013 4:22:00 AM
you are a born poetess , i love this poem and enjoyed too much .. i agree with moonbee , you are a talented girl ...
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:42:00 PM
My mind crystallized with this masterpiece. You create such awe-inspiring images with your words. Love the work! Keep it up! Always, Laura
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:16:00 AM
I'm delighted with every incoming comment. Thank you. from the bottom of my heart. luv~ LINDA
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