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Kaleidoscope Eyes

Round and round I go 
Unfolding my spirit of envy and gold
The nascence of a new stone
Hazel room, vibrant lilac sky, 
Deep orange haze in a tender place 
Arms of sapphire and cornflower blue
Fuchsia beauty drips, covering my ruby lips

All colors drift
On the first day, we met
Visions of dark slate-gray fade away
Firing up the new-age gem
Turning and creating different stars
Magic mint skies
White antique petals follow the current of air
Opal dreams, clouds embedded with impurity
My heartbeat produces flashing colors 
The palest amethyst bluebonnet forever fields
Flawless tear-drop streams
Diamond shaped love
Ruby Red promises to keep 
Flowing into the deep
Every color spins new
The day I fell in love with you
Peridot lime green tint 
A love as old and gray
Olive brownish sun
Honeydew skin
Our future, deeper than aquamarine 
Every day you turn fresh new seasons in me
Changing the sequence in my colors and effect

Kaleidoscope Eyes
Reflect by the mirrors of you
Crystallizing everything

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 3, 2016 at 9:11 PM Simply beautiful, Linda. A bouquet of rainbow imagery. You are truly a talented poetess. I agree w/the other poets/poetesses. And such an impressive catalog of poems. This is my maiden voyage into your sea of prose. And I love to go on a pleasure cruise. Ty for inspiring me to strive to be a better rounded poet. Plus you know the various forms of poetry. I'm a novice in terms of knowing the diff styles. Love your work already. Much love and more love to you and yours.

Rohan Moran May 20, 2016 at 1:41 AM A stunning work, beyond the realm of colourful, kaelodoscopic in title, wording and imagery. My minds eye feels like a shattered rainbow after reading this, in a very unique and beautiful way. Thank you for sharing this Linda Rohan

Scott Williams May 1, 2016 at 9:06 PM Love it. Congratulations on your win.

Naddy Zahari January 20, 2016 at 5:45 AM This is a masterpiece. This is my favorite. I love how this poem makes me feel. Keep writing!

Sheri Fresonke Harper March 14, 2014 at 6:11 PM You make me remember my childhood; I loved Kaleidoscopes, very wonderful poem Linda

Robin Davis November 13, 2013 at 4:45 PM Linda This is a very imaginative and charming write. The imagery and descriptive way you write those shows the reader how much love is in your heart. Nice job

Len Gasun September 23, 2013 at 9:09 AM Hi, my dearest sis! Stopping by for a while to read once again 1 of my fave & 1 of the stellar masterpieces of yours. Embracing tightly the grace it gives 2 me this evening. Thank u so much. Sorry, i just came only now. Just came home. I went out w/ some friends for aerobics then dine out. Im coming back tom. ok. I want to thank you so much for the lovely comments on my poems, the smiles & warm thoughts. Biggest sweet hugs,smiles & kisses back @ u. Good nyt! Tcare. God bless! lovemuch4evr, Leo

Kelly Deschler September 13, 2013 at 3:53 PM This is a very colorful picture that you have painted with your words! Very mesmerizing, I loved it!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. It means so much! :) By the way, I made a visit to your blog! :)

Gail Debole September 7, 2013 at 5:44 PM Your descriptive poem is a delight!

Liam Mcdaid September 6, 2013 at 11:10 AM YOU WEAVED THIS PIECE VERY BEAUTIFUL

Honestly J.T. September 1, 2013 at 12:44 PM Good poem ~Soup Mail~

Courtney Courtney August 29, 2013 at 7:43 PM top notch stuff Poet

Harry Horsman August 2, 2013 at 1:52 PM Oh how i am so happy to have read this beauty, amazing poetry, Linda,,,

Sue-Ellen Newman July 30, 2013 at 4:29 AM Another outstanding poem, perfect in every way,,, imagery of colour just perfect,,, excellent my poet friend,,,, blessings and hugs sueellen

Ken Carroll July 28, 2013 at 6:23 PM Hi Linda Paloma, Your writings have a touch of magic within them.. Compositions that reach the soul... Ken...:)

Sean L Sanders July 28, 2013 at 10:48 AM Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anybody would love this attention.

Gerald Kithinji July 28, 2013 at 4:49 AM ...the day I fell in love with you...the day I fell in love with poetry.

Nico Vivi July 22, 2013 at 10:06 PM I really like it! My favorite part was, "magic mint eyes, white antique petals follow the wind, opal dreams clouds embedded with impurity." It sounds vivid and flows like a river on an endless course~! And random fact, I remember kaleidoscopes! They were fun toys and I am happy this poem was able to remind me of my childhood days ^_^ thank you.

Perry Campanella July 22, 2013 at 12:29 PM Hi! Linda -beautiful poem - also I like rhis stanza best - "Peridot lime green shade a love as old and gray olive brownish sun honeydew skin" ( Try that poem without ( The ) also Thank you for this post also instructions! Got it now! Perry Campanella

Suzanne Delaney July 21, 2013 at 9:00 PM Such a feast of colors. It flows and flashes so naturally. Thanks for your visits. They are always a great encouragement to me.

Cherl Dunn July 21, 2013 at 8:31 PM I have only one word for this write beautiful. thank you my friend. love cheri

Jack Horne July 20, 2013 at 9:39 AM this is awesome, PD. Hope you have a lovely weekend xx

Wahab Abdul July 20, 2013 at 4:22 AM you are a born poetess , i love this poem and enjoyed too much .. i agree with moonbee , you are a talented girl ...

Laura Breidenthal July 19, 2013 at 8:42 PM My mind crystallized with this masterpiece. You create such awe-inspiring images with your words. Love the work! Keep it up! Always, Laura

Poet Destroyer A July 19, 2013 at 8:16 AM I'm delighted with every incoming comment. Thank you. from the bottom of my heart. luv~ LINDA

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