Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Eyes First Meet

by Michael J. Falotico


                                           a distant flower
                                    standing alone in the grey
                                          with alluring glow


           colors capture me
       closer the warmth pulls
           fingertips touching


                                          lips meet with passion
                                 mouths join and become one breath
                                          our air and hearts one

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Wilma Neels March 27, 2011 at 10:49 AM Hehe, I had a giggle at Dr. Ram's comment, a real beauty, wonder if this will happen to me lol ;) enjoyed this one too Michael, love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2011 at 2:18 PM this is beautiful. But tell me, did it really happen that way? I think that would be really exciting to kiss a stranger with an alluring glow!! thanks for the example, Michael.

Dr.Ram Mehta March 25, 2011 at 1:18 PM hahahah distant flowers are always alluring, the nearest are curing.. hahah lovely sensual humor, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 25, 2011 at 12:57 PM Wow passionate and vibrant lines of your example poem for your fantastic contest Michael.. excellent emotion comes forth from these lovely lines.. good luck luv.. and will try to do my best on my favorite subject ..LUV... your Jersey Girl in LUV mode writing for u ..

Carolyn Devonshire March 25, 2011 at 9:14 AM So passionate, almost intoxicating, Michael! You gave everyone a superb example for your contest. It's hard for me to write of romance like you do and I envy your talent. Thanks for your comments on Dr. Ram. He's terrific! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud March 25, 2011 at 9:00 AM i go goooey over this buffet of senryu; very heartwarming, michael.. must be a spin from your anniversary... incredible, winning;s best if for a contest..:) hugggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 25, 2011 at 8:31 AM thank you for the very warm welcome (that's also why I can't keep out long? people like you make it hard to stay away here!) stay as sweet as you are, ok? I'll always just be around :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 25, 2011 at 8:25 AM Hi Michael :) this sure is a wonderful example for your contest-- enjoyed reading this romantic piece as I returned here :)-- I hope all is well with you and thank you for my HM in your last contest :)

Francine Roberts March 25, 2011 at 8:12 AM hot hot hot, will have to rethink mine , it's just boring next to this

Elaine George March 25, 2011 at 7:45 AM What a challenge this will be. How do you compete with this, Michael? I will try. Lainie

Michael J. Falotico March 25, 2011 at 7:09 AM My example for my new contest... This is a true scene from many years back... Enjoy the contest Soup Family...always Michael