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Eyes First Meet

by Michael J. Falotico a distant flower standing alone in the grey with alluring glow colors capture me closer the warmth pulls fingertips touching lips meet with passion mouths join and become one breath our air and hearts one

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Wilma Neels

Date: 3/27/2011 10:49:00 AM

Hehe, I had a giggle at Dr. Ram's comment, a real beauty, wonder if this will happen to me lol ;) enjoyed this one too Michael, love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2011 2:18:00 PM

this is beautiful. But tell me, did it really happen that way? I think that would be really exciting to kiss a stranger with an alluring glow!! thanks for the example, Michael.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/25/2011 1:18:00 PM

hahahah distant flowers are always alluring, the nearest are curing.. hahah lovely sensual humor, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2011 12:57:00 PM

Wow passionate and vibrant lines of your example poem for your fantastic contest Michael.. excellent emotion comes forth from these lovely lines.. good luck luv.. and will try to do my best on my favorite subject ..LUV... your Jersey Girl in LUV mode writing for u ..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2011 9:14:00 AM

So passionate, almost intoxicating, Michael! You gave everyone a superb example for your contest. It's hard for me to write of romance like you do and I envy your talent. Thanks for your comments on Dr. Ram. He's terrific! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/25/2011 9:00:00 AM

i go goooey over this buffet of senryu; very heartwarming, michael.. must be a spin from your anniversary... incredible, winning;s best if for a contest..:) hugggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/25/2011 8:31:00 AM

thank you for the very warm welcome (that's also why I can't keep out long? people like you make it hard to stay away here!) stay as sweet as you are, ok? I'll always just be around :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/25/2011 8:25:00 AM

Hi Michael :) this sure is a wonderful example for your contest-- enjoyed reading this romantic piece as I returned here :)-- I hope all is well with you and thank you for my HM in your last contest :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/25/2011 8:12:00 AM

hot hot hot, will have to rethink mine , it's just boring next to this

Elaine George

Date: 3/25/2011 7:45:00 AM

What a challenge this will be. How do you compete with this, Michael? I will try. Lainie

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/25/2011 7:09:00 AM

My example for my new contest... This is a true scene from many years back... Enjoy the contest Soup Family...always Michael