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You possess me with those eyes of pyromania a tidal wave of temptation thrashing into my need for euphoria romanticized on appetite for agile reckoning of kiss ravishing, harnessing my hysteria, plumed with lashes lent from love's wings, curling wet wishing brows preened sexy mean, fur strip stiring me, hypnotized by your hot umber rings I learn how suspense stings circles of crave unbuckling my brazen brandishing, deep set on my desire I'm unraveling for the vixen fire, heart sweating, born from the brown of beauty's sweetest warmth eyes that bite and suck the stress right out of my soul's duress, for you I go forth... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ You possess me with those eyes of eagle blue you use a single glance my hesitancy to unglue soaring in the sky of my sweetened fantasy these blue crystal orbs foretell of ecstasy But first...the hunt...looking for prey - it's true it's you - the Eagle brutally brave and fiercely famished you glide on the wind of my desire your wings ablaze with fire your eyes fierce, Oh, how they pierce again and again my inner sanctum deep their hue puts the sky to shame demanding passion and cravings untame they bore deep into me slashing bonds of inhibition free Our eyes speak Brown and Blue Me and You... in your eyes the need to seize in mine, the need to please yours dominate mine capitulate yours subjugate mine consummate, your eyes speak... mine respond...Bonded, we belong Eagle and Dove poetry love Our eyes speak... A Collaboration Made From The Quills Of Justin & Eileen

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/25/2015 3:30:00 AM

Wow, the eagle and dove soar!! An amazing poem by two passionate souls...you write with two hearts beating as one!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/24/2015 12:52:00 PM

Thanks for your comment on my "Better" poem, you made my day. Hugs Rick!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/24/2015 1:05:00 PM

I'm glad. You've made my day many a time..... :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/24/2015 1:44:00 AM

You are a Dove of glorious beauty, with eyes of pure passion and wings of resilient grace...Our combined ink glistens with wild taste Eileen...and that picture to match our poem speaks of true partnership...I love it! I am honored to dance Quills with you...Justin

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/24/2015 11:03:00 AM

So very often...you have been the wind beneath my wings with your words of encouragement. :) Our combined ink does glisten...I knew you'd like the picture. I know your tastes well. Dancing quills with you has been a sheer delight and pleasure. XO

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/23/2015 4:49:00 PM

Two of my favorite poets collabing...I'm in for a treat! ...reading.... Ah gee, where do I begin. Fascinating unity with the strength of passion...I love this: ""in your eyes the need to seize in mine, the need to please" Eagle and Dove personified by some beautiful, clever people. I am a big fan of you both. Love you guys! Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 10:16:00 PM

Thank you, Laura, for this kind sweet comment. I'm touched by your gracious words. I've always seen Justin as an Eagle...flying high...flying free...There is a strength to his heart that I admire. I'm just pleased that he accepted to collab with me. I find his words...fascinating. :) I appreciate your visit, dear. Hugs

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/23/2015 4:02:00 PM

A wonderful collaboration... love the imagery... a bond between an eagle and a dove... a daring act by the dove and being in a state of hypnosis... great imaginatio ...#7... goes intk my favs list ...love,nad!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 10:18:00 PM

Thank you, Nadiya. Poetry is all about living above and beyond the here and now and seeing ideal beauty. This has a touch of that in it. I love having Justin's name on my page as a co-author. :) I have collaborated with several here on the Soup. Very satisfying experience, indeed.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/23/2015 11:59:00 AM

A dream come true....the eagle and the dove fly in harmony on wings of passion and desire. This works excellently in free verse....no ties or strings to inhibit free expression. Well done to both of you, Justin and Eileen, you compliment each other effortlessly; no dips in the graph...just a continuous upward curve. This is going into my favs! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/23/2015 2:25:00 PM

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 12:11:00 PM

Paul...I was so thrilled when you chose to follow my lead and write about something passionate. That piece I something I will always treasure! :) I love dwelling on this theme. It's the lens through which I view life. I loved our collaboration....in rhyme. Justin and I free fell on this one. I love his ability to express himself with no fear of what people think. His language is very...raw and real. No euphemisms. I'm drawn to his work and to him as a person. I've found him to be a very kind and compassionate person as well. I do wish him every good thing in life....He deserves to have that larger than life quality living. Thanks for the visit, my dear. I can always open up to you. :) You are so kind and good to me. I look forward to writing again with you. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/23/2015 10:16:00 AM

The Prince and Queen of passionate pens have demonstrated their wondorous skills. I am beyond impressed. Magnificent! This is such a treat to read something from the two of you.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:43:00 AM

Wow, thank you, Richard. You gave me a title I will always treasure. Justin does well in the passion domain as well. :) I'm just a little peeved because someone rated this a 6.40....I know it's not you, but it does have me a little upset. Oh well....the opinions that matter...are here to make me happy. Yours a precious vote of confidence, Richard. Hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/23/2015 9:21:00 AM

eyes of pyromania, irresistible read. Wow Wondera/Justin . Best wishes

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:45:00 AM

I'm glad you visited, Rajat, and left your best wishes. It was a great experience working with Justin. I feel free and able to express myself without fear of judgment or recrimination....it's a glorious feeling. Thanks for stopping by.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/23/2015 9:00:00 AM

Imaginative wizardry with the pen. Emile.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:45:00 AM

Thank you, Emile. I hope that you were enchanted by this wizardry.

Ayesha Karim

Date: 1/23/2015 8:46:00 AM

This is a powerful poem about what is said and what is unsaid between two lovers. Good job!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:47:00 AM

Thank you for your visit to my work, Ayesha. I was glad that Justin accepted to collaborate with me. I think that our words flow well together...

David Meade

Date: 1/23/2015 8:05:00 AM

A powerful image contrast between the eagle and the dove -- I saw both fly with grace and wonder upon the wind -- the eagle soaring and diving, the dove dancing and darting . . . such were your words upon my heart! 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:53:00 AM

David...I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery here. I've given Justin the title Eagle quite some time ago...Eagle and Gladiator....somehow these two titles just suit my image of him so well. There is a rawness and strength in his writes...He isn't afraid to pull out all the stops and let his inner thoughts ooze on the page. I admire that. I chose to be a dove for this piece....I'm not always dove like. There is a fierceness in my soul that I often have to keep subdued. It's sad....but that is life. Thanks for the visit. You know every one is precious.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/23/2015 7:41:00 AM

Wow!!!both of you... WoW!!!A big favourite!!: )

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie. This has been a dream come true. :) I'm honored to write with Justin.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/23/2015 6:44:00 AM

Titanic clash of verses with poetry the winner! A seven to both, Eileen and Justin, Justin and Eileen! Bravo!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:56:00 AM

We both love to write of passion, my dear poet. Passion and romance are wondrous themes. I was really hoping you would read and comment on the poem before this one. The one of the REAL Valentine story...Scars of Love. Please promise me you will read that and give me your input. I'm very anxious to know your thoughts. You know your opinion of me and my work are precious to my heart. Kindly, take the time to read it. I would be grateful.