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For soap, he had headed to store, With Hope, to wash away his yore. A little bleep was all he needs, He took hot tea to soothe his sore. Potter's hands were rebuff, he heeds, From dealing with such rough clay beads. He chose to dismiss their skilled palm, He'd had much of the pain and seeds. He was the one with the alarm, Onetime cold and then by love, warm. Life is held in with tangled thread, He pull and shook till overwhelm. Wisdom couldn't follow the pot core, With fate and death, tied to his cord.
Written: May 09, 2022

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Date: 5/31/2022 8:47:00 AM
A wonderful Rubaiyat poem Sotto, love the ending couplet “Wisdom couldn't follow the pot core, With fate and death, tied to his cord.”…… Belle
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Date: 5/21/2022 5:04:00 PM
Your depth of thought:extraordinary! A potter lives and dies through his clay! Wow! :)Paulette
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Date: 5/16/2022 7:18:00 AM
Very deep thoughts, Lasaad:) brilliant usage of form too:)
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Date: 5/12/2022 9:52:00 AM
Your poems amazing, your thoughts amazing, your talent amazing, you always inspire and amaze us, you are amazing! I have not forgotten you my friend Lesaad but time to spend on my passion, poetry no less, and answering comments has become a challenge. Thank-you for your support and Friendship. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 5/11/2022 8:48:00 PM
Profound and intense in thoughts, perfect in form. You are not for the average, Lasaad !
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Date: 5/10/2022 4:11:00 PM
Deep thoughts in an amazing form. Truly enjoyed. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 5/10/2022 6:41:00 AM
Sotto, wonderful Rubaiyat, and great example for your contest which I am enjoying very much, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 5/10/2022 6:19:00 AM
A Poem, brimming with power. Lasaad
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Date: 5/10/2022 4:56:00 AM
Your poem give voice to his pain.
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Date: 5/10/2022 2:19:00 AM
Intricate thoughts and a great poem.
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