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Extemporaneous Love

Extemporaneous Love Like a fire contained in a crate extemporaneous love burning wildly outside compassionate law fiery eyed suave, furtive glance soft, quick stroke at the back of the neck and a long voluptuous wish electric current charging the eros energy of thought undone dares elicit naughtiness beginning with a friendly touch the words “hello” suggestive smile yes, so suggestive 11/14/17

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Date: 3/21/2020 1:49:00 PM
Janis, Congratulations! Wonderful weaving of words and images.
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Date: 11/12/2018 10:52:00 AM
Hi Janis, dropping by with my congratulations on your much deserved win in the contest with this excellent Piece. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/10/2018 2:06:00 PM
Congrats!!
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Date: 11/6/2018 1:25:00 PM
This poem intrigues and is exemplary work outside the box. Beautiful Janis! Congratulations on your top placement!
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Date: 11/21/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thought provoking, Janis:)
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:51:00 AM
Sensual & Beautiful. Excellent poem, Janis.
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:34:00 PM
Delightful poem, Janis.
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Date: 11/14/2017 1:39:00 PM
Very provocative poem, Janis. You're at the top of your truth game on this passionate free verse. Like a moth attracted to the flame ... many don't wanna go there, but just can't help themselves. Such sensual honesty. It sways to an ethereal groove this poem does. You are one pen svelte Sassafras lady. My personal pen tipped compliment to your poetic prowess. Exotic poetry for real. Love and joy always.
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Date: 11/14/2017 11:04:00 AM
Yes, that is how it begins...and too often, there is an unhappy end when lust is the fuel. Very creative write, Janis. Gives one pause for thought. Thank you for your kind comment on my Death poem. Much appreciated.
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:49:00 AM
Very creative in content and delivery. A joy to read. Blessings ... CayCay
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