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crystallise within me soon a poem will be

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Samir Georges

Date: 2/28/2010 12:56:00 AM

I wish I could write such simple poems!:D Well it's something I'm going to have to start doing, I've been known too long as Samir the Long Winded :P You know it's a great write when it inspires others to try as well, thanks for that Brian.

James Foulk

Date: 2/27/2010 1:30:00 PM

very clever piece you wrote. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comment

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/27/2010 12:53:00 PM

You have said it with such ease and it's wonderful. Regards: Déirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 11:37:00 AM

Very very true ... luv the crystalise opening as I feel that words do exactly that ..then the granuales of crystals infiltrate the brain ..the brain ..the pen .. the pen.. the paper.. which all beings with meditation with God.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/27/2010 9:18:00 AM

Very cool write. Thanks for sharing and thank you for choosing my poem as an honorable mention in your contest, Brian. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2010 8:18:00 AM

I really like this one, Brian, and if I forgot to say it, thank you so much for my placement in your awesome contest and for teaching us that new form I'd never heard of before. Also, thanks for the other contests you sponsor to inspire the Poet soupers. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2010 5:17:00 AM

Lookin' forward to the write that has crystalized and turned to sugar. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/27/2010 3:14:00 AM

As soon as we are free from confusion, words keep pouring on our mind as combustion to poetry. Nice sharing this, Brian. (^_^) Noel.