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Expedition

The day is fresh
Long before the sun yawns into the morning
The sound of bells clanging
Ropes whipping the mast into shape
Creaking of the old boats

A feint smell of lobster
Rises to meet me as the zip
Rasps towards my chin
Along the comfortable material 
Of the gilet

Can the ocean be trusted?
No more than the weather
No more than a wild animal
However tamed they appear
Domesticated the ocean will never be

I climb down the wooden ladder
Into the trusty boat
I pause in the moment
Feet sensing the security of
My familiar friend

Stormy seas we have seen
Yet she welcomes me back
I sense her sigh with relief
A voiceless, palpable release
As I hoist the sail

Pushing away from the harbour wall
We both know
This is not the place for us
A gull invites us to follow
So we nod along
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La France Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Sam, absolutely outstanding, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your poem, the image, the quote and that audio, wow, now that is how an audio is done, well done.
Scott Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Some wonderful poems in your contest with such an array of taLented poets. Thank you for placing me and for such lovely lovely comments x look forward to the next one!
Empress Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Oh sam! You wrote for the prompt! I am so pleased to see you were inspired. I really loved this poem, the imagery and how it flows, so many lines stood out for me especially “ can the ocean be trusted” good question. Intriguing and heartfelt. Thank you for writing. Congratulations
Scott Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 7:13 AM
You are a true inspiration and I am lifted by your always kind words. I did enjoy this one and the ocean is a theme often revisited :))
Bauer Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 9:54 AM
beautifully described, sam! i could picture it perfectly (even if i don't know what a gilet is)...
Scott Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 9:59 AM
ilene, you are wonderful to say, thankyou. I do recommend a gilet for Winter :)
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