Debra L Brown Poet Haiku

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Exotic Queen

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                                           rose, exotic queen

                                     thy skin pure silk and milky ~

                                              bouquet alluring


                        

                                         Written on 3/31/2022
                                   A Brian Strand Premier Choice
                                        Sponsor: Brian Strand
                                                   ~10th~
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Paghunda Zahid July 25, 2022 at 12:06 PM Great imagery.... Well penned... Thanks for sharing

Paula Goldsmith April 15, 2022 at 12:32 PM A "Wonderful" Haiku write and pretty picture. I love butterflies. Wish I had this picture. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Bill Baker April 6, 2022 at 4:31 PM Nicely penned Haiku with lovely accompanying image. Hugs, Bill Debra L Brown April 6, 2022 at 8:49 PM Thanks for your kind words, Bill, Blessings ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick April 5, 2022 at 4:17 AM Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Rose petals are a wonderful velvet. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Debra L Brown April 5, 2022 at 5:53 PM Thanks for your kind words, Sara, Blessings ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 4, 2022 at 5:28 PM Sweet! Congratulations on your win. :) Debra L Brown April 4, 2022 at 5:31 PM Thank you, Evelyn, Blessings ~ Debra

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2022 at 6:05 PM So beautiful. A fine win Debra L Brown April 4, 2022 at 5:32 PM Thank you, Andrea, Blessings ~ Debra

Ann Peck April 2, 2022 at 8:28 AM A lovely Haiku, Debra. Congratulation on your win! Debra L Brown April 4, 2022 at 5:33 PM Thank you, Ann, Blessings ~ Debra

Pashang Salehi April 2, 2022 at 12:04 AM Be thankful that thorns have roses... Pashang Salehi April 8, 2022 at 12:29 PM Always... Debra L Brown April 4, 2022 at 5:34 PM Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Sam Kauffman April 1, 2022 at 9:38 AM Debra, congratulations on your win with this lovely and "alluring" rose haiku. Wonderfully descriptive picture of a rose. Sending you many blessings! Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 12:52 PM Thanks for your encouraging words, Sam. Blessings ~ Debra

JC Brul April 1, 2022 at 6:36 AM Majestic Haiku..Congratulations on your win! Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 12:57 PM Thanks, JCB, for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George April 1, 2022 at 3:10 AM Congratulations on your great win Debra ! Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 12:57 PM Thanks, Valsa, for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Beata Agustin April 1, 2022 at 2:40 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 1:04 PM Thanks Beata, for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar April 1, 2022 at 1:10 AM Your poem is alluring enough. Best for a win. Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 1:05 PM Thanks for your encouraging words, Victor. Blessings ~ Debra

Christuraj Alex March 31, 2022 at 10:36 PM Very beautiful haiku. Congratulations! Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 1:04 PM Thanks, Christuraj, for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo March 31, 2022 at 10:27 PM Sis Deb, I grow Marigold for Monarchs & related species. But tolerant of some weeds, my garden attracts medium sized white butterflies that thrills my heart. Glad to come fir Seconds. Peace of Jesus Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 1:11 PM I have never saw a white Butterflies before, not in this area. I image white butterflies and orange marigolds would be a beautiful site. Have a nice evening Anil, thanks for stopping by. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George March 31, 2022 at 8:49 PM Silky milky creamy rose..... ! Love it, Debra ! Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 12:58 PM Thanks, Valsa, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo March 31, 2022 at 7:05 PM Alluring - silky & milky butterfly messages. Much thanx & appreciation Sis Debra. My comment on YR comment didn't see light, LOL Debra L Brown March 31, 2022 at 7:14 PM Hi! Anil, I believe are comments went to another world, (Lol) let's hope they were a blessing. Thanks for stopping by. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues March 31, 2022 at 6:47 PM Each word entices more..very nice, Debra! Debra L Brown March 31, 2022 at 7:15 PM Thanks for your encouraging words, Kim. Blessings ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf March 31, 2022 at 5:49 PM Interesting angle on the 'exotic queen.' Lovely penned, Debra! Nectar and Nectarines, Gershon Debra L Brown March 31, 2022 at 7:16 PM Thanks, Gershon, for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Rico Leffanta March 31, 2022 at 11:36 AM Monarch reign? Aloha! Debra L Brown March 31, 2022 at 5:45 PM Thanks Rico, for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra