Excited Teddy Bears

Two teddy bears, named
Ted and Fred,
Packed a picnic basket with buns,
And home-made bread,
Keep to the path their mummy said,
So off they went, along the way,
Happy teddy bears were Ted and Fred,
We’re going to the woods’ hurray, 
What a lovely, happy first of May,
Was this exciting warm Spring Day.
They swung their basket as they skipped,
They sung and saw fresh berries’
Which they picked,
Poor little Fred his finger pricked,
It’s just a scratch,
Big brother said,	
But we must be careful, said Ted,
It’s going to rain, must find 
A safe, dry place,
Fred began to cry, tears streaked 
Down his face.
The clouds were building up in the sky,
Lightning and thunder way up high,
Each one pulled up their hood.
Brrr………… its getting cold,
Don’t walk so fast Ted, said little Fred,
I’m scared, are we so very lost,
No, Ted replied, but we must find
The path back home at any cost.
Big brother looked helplessly around,
Felt hopeless, for young brother Fred
Who wanted mummy, what if they could not
Find their way back home, what a dread,
That would break their parent's heart,
Shhh ……. Fred, said Ted, lets' find
the path, where did we start'.
Mama and papa bears began to worry,
They put their raincoats on, 
And went into the woods, where are my
Baby bears mama cried,
Freddy and Ted.
Papa bear bravely took the lead,
Mama don’t fret said he,
We will find them soon you’ll see.
Both plump and slow,
Papa started to sing, I know,
Singing calms you down, join me.
The little bears heard their parents singing,
Excited, they began flinging
Up their scarves and hats, screaming,
We are over here, we are over here,
They ran into each other’s arms, so glad,
All were so happy, this picnic,
Could have ended sad,
For eventually no picnic was even had.
They all joined hands and sung,
As their voices merrily rung
Through-out the woods.
They got back home papa, Fred and Ted 
Watched TV,
Whilst mama bear prepared supper happily,
She read them nursery rhymes in bed,
They fell asleep, she tucked them in,
Sleep well my babies, mama said.
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Kiser Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 12:48 PM
This is so cute and sweet; beautifully crafted story of these little teddy bears.
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May 25, 2023 at 5:52 PM
What a wonderful story Jennifer for children to read and enjoy, or have the story read to them. The child in me loves teddy bears and this poem too. Hugs and blessings dear friend… Belle
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April 19, 2023 at 11:47 AM
This is such a delightful story that both young and old would enjoy and read more than once, Jenny. I love stories with a happy ending, and you have not disappointed me :) Now, let me read it once more! ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 12:43 PM
- A lovely and sweet fairy tale, dear Jenny :) - A wonderful bear family :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 11:17 AM
What a charming account of events! You have the ability to paint vivid pictures that are brimming with life and are incredibly lifelike. My sincere congratulations, Jennifer; as you have a natural talent for telling stories. Definitely a slice of real life, and I think many parents of small children would be able to relate to the situations described in this wonderful poem. Blessings dear friend
Babcock Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Loved the fairy tale told here about the bears. Well written and enjoyable at any age. Hope you had a wonderful Easter. Hugs. love phyl
Ricci Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 3:08 AM
Dear Jennifer. Allow me to say Wow and Wow again. This is flawless and truly well thought out in its entirety. You could publish this entry. It reads wonderful whether you are a child or child at heart. Thank you for sharing your skilled writing talent. Be proud of this entry Jennifer. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always (smile)
Baker Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 7:39 AM
A sweet Fairy Tale about bears, I loved it. I read it to all my bears on the top of my rolltop desk. They all agreed, great entry for the contest, a winner we think it should be! they sang out with glee, and I agree. Thanks for sharing my friend, Hugs, Bill
George Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 10:28 PM
What a lovely story ! You can paint lucid images full of life and so very realistic. Dear Jenny, you are indeed a gifted story teller ! Truly a slice of everyday life and I am sure all parents can relate to this story with young children. How they fret when naughty children go out for adventures. I am sure everyone will enjoy this story.
Wolf Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 6:59 PM
All's well that ends well! ... I couldn't bear to see a sad ending in this one. Thanks, Jennifer! :) gw
Buehler Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Your sweet, captivating story is sure to delight any child, Jennifer. Blessings and hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 9:34 AM
so very sweet , jennifer. it reminded me of a bear family like from Goldilocks
Proxenos Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Hi Andrea I'm so glad you enjoyed my teddy bears. I enjoyed your dog and frog and the fairy frog father great poem - hugs and blessings Jennifer
Sands Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 9:44 AM
This is very sweet. A Fave for me. Well written Jennifer! Love the happy outcome :)
Proxenos Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Hi Heidi my friend, thank you for your very awesome comment, so happy you enjoyed my Teddy Bears . Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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April 3, 2023 at 1:48 AM
Cute story. Best of luck.
Proxenos Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Hi Victor, hope you are well - thank you for a lovely comment, Jennifer
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April 3, 2023 at 6:26 AM
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April 2, 2023 at 4:31 PM
A sweet fairy tale, Jennifer. Best of luck!
Proxenos Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 7:15 PM
Thank you Ann and thank you for visiting lovely that you did . Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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April 2, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Hello Jennifee3, so good to see you post. This poem is cute. It will be my fav. Enjoy your your day my friend. Hugs. I hope all is well with you. /Darlene\
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April 2, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Hello Jennifer, I am glad you are fine. You are welcome. You are also one of my fav. people on Poetry Soup. Hugs & Blessings my friend. /Darlene\
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April 2, 2023 at 11:26 AM
Darlene, i am truly fine but all the better for hearing from you - thank-you for an awesome comment. You are one of my fave people on poetry soup. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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