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Evil Hair

My hair is an evil mess, tangled and thick, brushes and combs just won't fix. I battle and struggle against the beast, which fights back with stings like teeth. Eventually I give in to those sharp stings and let my hair be so it stops hurting. If it would just listen and work with me, it could look decent and less fuzzy. But it will do what it wants, no matter what I say, so I guess it wins, again, for yet another day.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 1:52:00 AM

Brianna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Brianna Little
Date: 8/6/2016 2:26:00 AM

Thanks for the welcome, Linda. :) Criticism is welcome. I'll read some of your poems, too.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2016 4:57:00 PM

I think many can relate Brianna - thanks for making me smile:-) hugs jan xx

Brianna Little
Date: 8/3/2016 5:04:00 PM

Hair can be pretty difficult. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it! :)

Julie Smith

Date: 8/3/2016 2:38:00 PM

This is cute I like your writing style:)

Brianna Little
Date: 8/3/2016 2:47:00 PM

Aww thank you. :)

Christine Lehman

Date: 8/3/2016 9:51:00 AM

HAH - I love that! And really identify with it too - my hair is a pain in the you-know-what in the mornings! Thanks for a nice laugh this morning! :-)

Brianna Little
Date: 8/3/2016 2:30:00 PM

It is a pain. :P I'm glad my poem made someone laugh!

Skat A

Date: 8/3/2016 5:24:00 AM

Briamna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Brianna Little
Date: 8/3/2016 6:44:00 AM

Thanks for the warm welcome and wishes! I've just recently been getting into writing poetry so if you do read others I hope you like them. :)