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Everything's Going To Be Alright

You had to go and leave me Not because you wanted to I know it broke your heart I saw it in your smile I saw it in your eyes You hung on with superhuman strength You clawed your way through life You fought with all your heart I saw it in your smile I saw it in your eyes Your days were all but numbered You gave it all you had Your last words etched forever in my heart I saw it in your smile I saw it in your eyes I’m up with each day’s sunrise On through the night talk with my friend the moon About how you’re still right here in my heart I see it in your smile I see it in your eyes In the dark of night I still see your smile I still see your eyes So deep down I know Everything's going to be alright Read on air by invitation ~ April 22, 2021 'LATE NIGHT POETS' AP: 1st place 2021, Front Page Pick 2021 Submitted on April 25, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (APR 26) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 5/1/2021 8:21:00 PM
'with my friend the moon.' This tugs at my heart, Line. Glad you can talk with the white-hearted friend. All I can do is howl at it. ~ Howlin' Wolf ... Smiles, gw
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Date: 5/1/2021 8:24:00 PM
lol ~ thanks, Gershon
Date: 4/28/2021 8:03:00 PM
Ohhh Line your words are truly beautiful and they bring a tear to my eye, for everything will be alright my dear friend ~ hugs & love Ann xx
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Date: 4/29/2021 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated ~
Date: 4/28/2021 6:32:00 AM
Yes it will be alright ! special poem <3
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Date: 4/28/2021 10:36:00 AM
Much appreciated, Paris-Maree ~
Date: 4/28/2021 3:06:00 AM
This is so beautifully sad dear Line.. I loved the repetition of line.. ' I saw it in your smile, I saw it in your eyes'... Hearty congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 4/28/2021 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Anitha ~ most appreciated
Date: 4/27/2021 12:57:00 PM
This is so beautiful Line ! Very well written and special :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2021 7:43:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Most appreciated ~
Date: 4/26/2021 4:20:00 PM
The mood is somber and the night is darkly beautiful in this exquisite poem, Line. Such pleasure to read! Good luck in the contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2021 6:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Evelyn ~
Date: 4/26/2021 2:53:00 AM
Serenity and Love within your heart is rendered here in your poetry.. As your reader and friend I do relish in the loving and comforting mood of your heart and poetic soul.. You had a life of great worth and memories that gives you the joy of a great time to come.. So happy for you! So pleased to read your wonderful poetry, dear Line. Stay always safe and happy. My warmest wishes and best regards. Love and hugs.
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Date: 4/26/2021 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely kindness, dear Besma ~

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