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Everything Seems Different Today

I realize I was lifeless before today Going through the motions But empty and lacking passion On standby waiting Yet trying to keep up I didn’t fool anyone Let alone you I could tell you were disappointed You expected more Because you had caught that glimpse Of what was once there A potential waiting to blossom You had seen it and As time passed by you thought I was letting that too wither away But I feel so totally different today Like buoyancy exudes From my every pore Beams of clarity from my eyes and Rays of compassion overflowing From my very heart There’s no turning back Today was life transforming Maybe even a rebirth AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted in March, 2018

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Date: 3/3/2018 9:38:00 PM
Alternate Title: "Theory of Revolution." ... And glad to see the potential realized! Well-done! Gershon
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:56:00 PM
Thanks, Gershom. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/3/2018 1:48:00 PM
Wonderful depth of emotion! Very powerful and full of emotion. It says a lot and yet doesn’t dwell on the pain. Your words transfer their energy to this poem and establish the mood and theme of this piece, as one of dismay overridden by a eureka moment that leads to an awakening within. Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Emile. Much appreciate your visit and insight.
Date: 3/3/2018 7:30:00 AM
"On standby, waiting." I cannot believe how apt that is to so many of us so many times; a purely great read. One of my favorites.
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/3/2018 3:33:00 AM
Maybe a revolutionary EVOLUTION. Bravo Line. X
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thanks for your fun visit and comment, Leanne. Always enjoyable.

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