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Fresh water, every shade of blue It moves with mesmerizing hues I am lost in this tranquil view Now all my thoughts replaced with new Staring in a moment or two The waves transform like mountains too I rest on land as if I flew As water moves me to renew Heidi Sands 6/28/17

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Md Johnson

Date: 12/22/2017 9:27:00 AM

The feeling of peace just overflows the soul when reading this...Very nicely done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2017 9:31:00 AM

That is nice to hear MD. I like to bring the feeling to the reader. Thank you :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/4/2017 3:54:00 PM

Very soothing poem Heidi.and I like the picture that goes along with it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/4/2017 5:40:00 PM

Yes it is soothing there

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/29/2017 2:41:00 PM

Hours upon hours pass each year doing just what you describe so amazingly dearest, Heidi! Superb Monorhyme my friend!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Demetrios. I appreciate your comment :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/29/2017 1:58:00 PM

Terrific use of form Heidi with such a soft flow...

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/29/2017 9:28:00 AM

Love this write Heidi; makes me yearn for the beach where hopefully they'll be no shark sightings!~Che :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 9:51:00 AM

Hi Cheryl. Thank you. Yes, I certainly hope there will be no shark sightings :)

Sara Ella

Date: 6/29/2017 6:34:00 AM

Lovely poem Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/29/2017 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Sara! :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/28/2017 7:21:00 PM

A lovely poem Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/28/2017 5:57:00 PM

what a refreshing write with a rhythmic flow to it, heidi... very nice!..huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 5:59:00 PM

Thank you Nette. I am happy it is refreshing as it feels to see it right there at the lake :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/28/2017 4:44:00 PM

Along with the color blue, this poem is very soothing, Heidi:) Nice monorhyme!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Daniel. It was very soothing to be there. I am happy it can come across as it was in the writing :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/28/2017 4:30:00 PM

lately blue shades have that effect on me, too. Nicely done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 4:31:00 PM

Thank you Dale. I appreciate your comment :)

Chris Green

Date: 6/28/2017 3:52:00 PM

This was nice and relaxing Heidi. I could picture myself sitting on an old dune reading this poem while the surf gently swayed in the breeze. Really nice.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/28/2017 3:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris. It was very relaxing to see :)