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Every Beat of the Way

Shades of gold, yellow and green Surround my home where it’s serene Although I must clean up the color that falls, While they are still on trees, such beautiful walls Shades of gold, yellow and green In every direction can be seen Trickling over the stone wall and baby trees The sights are peaking for anyone who sees The show of autumn is on beautiful display As the colors paint my heart, every beat of the way Heidi Sands 10/15/21

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2021 11:27:00 AM

Beautiful colors are everywhere. A "Beautiful" write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away..............

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/17/2021 12:42:00 PM

Thank you very much Paula. Colors everywhere, yes. Happy Sunday :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/15/2021 4:11:00 PM

Hello Heidi ... the colours of autumn are in total contrast to spring yet are very much as beautiful - Lindsay

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2021 4:32:00 PM

Yes , so true. I appreciate your comments and feedback Lindsay. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2021 2:05:00 PM

Enjoy those colors trickling down, Heidi. A beautiful poem you wrote in honor of autumn.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2021 3:07:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed it. I appreciate your visit today :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/15/2021 11:30:00 AM

Very well-crafted poem, Heidi. Your profound thoughts and exquisite metaphors are stunning too. I like these two verses: Trickling over the stone wall and baby trees The sights are peaking for anyone who sees

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2021 1:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Lasaad. I appreciate your kind feedback on this. I hope all is well :)

Debra L Brown

Date: 10/15/2021 11:29:00 AM

A nice fall poem. " Colors paint my heart" Loved that - Debbie

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/15/2021 1:37:00 PM

Thank you very much Debbie. I appreciate your kind comment :)