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Aesthetic things bestow us lasting satiety. as time oozes, its beauty only widens dwindling in a jolt, yet prevailing to arise a calm haven for us to unwind our soul the sheen of opalescence is a dream. I adore you the way cliffs love streams. savoring soulful waves and breathing bliss, as the earth basks in the sun's golden glow. Wanderlust's wild whimsy wanders as a weapon. There wasn't a single instance. much before I knew it was you. a single person who has made a major sync. the quiet moment when you're in tune with me, postulating that a bettor is on the way. I searched high and low for my true love. in search of the snail shell's sparkles with a shallow inner happiness wonder But, as wilted flowers, they faded quickly. Affection is in the air, the paintbrush is lovely,   You're the bird who agrees to join me on my love flight. Its powerful wings let it fly afar in the sky. Not a single day passed with no action. Before I was apodictic you were my beam, luminosity washed across my existence. I was terrified of drowning. I swam in the warmth of love. But the horrific lies kept piling up. It suffocated my genuine desires. With the wind whispering sweetly, When will the sun shine again, my love? Will it spill its molten compassion on both of us? Why I must face this dark place on my own? Is my affection for you overwhelming? Silken grazing artistry and moonlit radiance spark a desire for vivid colors and brightness. Invigorated and upbeat feelings are present. prior to the designer's luscious palette fading Allow the moments to pass you by as streams. My feelings for you are eternal. the veracity of an emotion that is special. Assuredness, mutuality, and the realization of a wish I wish to never suffer a day away from you!
Written: January 27, 2023 Upto You Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/29/2023 6:59:00 PM
" I swam in the warmth of love" I feel as if floating in the ocean of romantic love....! A highly passionate song of love. Congratulations dear friend on your great win.
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Date: 1/29/2023 2:48:00 AM
Beautiful writing. I love this. Congrats and God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/27/2023 2:12:00 PM
A splendid love poem. So much imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 1/27/2023 12:59:00 PM
Apodictically a resounding verse Lasaad, with a nuanced alliteration included, romanticism is off the scale I can only see this as a top winner, and hope the amount of work you put in is rewarded accordingly, cheers David
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Date: 1/27/2023 12:21:00 PM
A beautiful~write/picture. Have a wonderful day/weekend..............
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Date: 1/27/2023 11:17:00 AM
Lovely portrait of love, my friend. Whispers of romantic write spell passion throughout. Best to you, Lasaad.
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