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Written: July 09, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Another day dawns with a fresh start in view. Where endless possibilities lie anew, As the sun ascends, casting a golden hue, A chance to embrace a callow you For people, chasten, as seasons, may With each passing day, in a different way, But I vow, as the sun's first ray To fall in love with you, come what may. With each sunrise comes a chance to grow. To let our love flourish and truly show, As the world awakens and colors start to glow, Our love will blossom and continue to grow. Every day brings a different you. A chance to discover what's deep and true, And as the sun rises, painting the skies so blue, I find myself falling in love with you. With every morning a callow start, A chance to heal any broken parts, As the world spins and time departs, Our love will remain forever in our hearts. Through every alteration, we'll stand strong. Embracing the beauty that comes along, On each fresh day, we'll find a song, A melody of love that will carry us along. So let the sunrise, and let it shine. As we navigate this journey divine, With clean hearts and souls entwined, Our love will withstand the probe of time. Every starting day holds a promise untold. A chance for our love to unfold, And with each sunrise, we'll behold The magic of love, forever bold So let us cherish each ancillary dawn. As we dance to a love that's never gone, With every sunrise, a love reborn, An everlasting bond we've sworn

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Date: 7/10/2023 10:18:00 PM
Something about this particular piece is so precious, so touching. There is an interlude, a pause, then a whisper of things to come. Something quite everlasting. A very special poem dear friend. Practically a tribute to love.
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Date: 7/10/2023 4:32:00 AM
Love is something that has to be renewed with every fresh day. It shouldn't stay stagnant. It should continue to grow bit by bit until it becomes an ocean of love. I see here your love growing in geometric progression. A wonderful love poem, dear friend.
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Date: 7/10/2023 2:43:00 AM
It's great to have a love for another person that can last a lifetime. I enjoyed your passionate lines about this topic and how you feel about another person in your life. God bless the union. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 7/9/2023 9:22:00 PM
An alluring poem where the metaphoric sunrise is associated with love.Tremendously beautiful.
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Date: 7/9/2023 6:19:00 PM
A beautiful love poem, Sotto! I especially like the third stanza. Blessings, Kim M
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