Everlasting Love

Her coffin slowly drops into the ground,
the little group of mourners huddles there,
all standing pokerfaced, without a sound,
the vicar speaks his lines without a care...
I watch and gulp the frosty morning air.

Although I hadn't been there when she died,
my heart is breaking, overflowing grief;
it's been so many years now since she'd lied -
and yes, although our love had been so brief,
our feelings never died (that's my belief).

And as the rest depart, I stand alone
to wonder if she somehow knows I'm here.
My ear detects a sudden muffled moan -
has she been buried still alive? I fear,
or is she telling me: 'I know you're near'?

written 22nd July for Constance's Q contest - Death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ligon Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations, as I see this was a winner! Poignant and tender, yet haunting.
Peck Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 3:13 PM
Your poem is so sweet, Jack. I bet she was telling you that. There always seems to be one love we can't forget. Congrats for your win!
Peck Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 3:12 PM
Your poem is so sweet, Jack. I bet she was telling you that. There always seems to be one love we can't forget. Congrats for your win!
La France Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 5:46 AM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest with your emotional and beautiful Quintain, excellent writing, blessings ~ Constance
Kauffman Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 9:35 AM
This poem has the ability to reach right into the heart and give it a twist Jack. The emotions of sadness and regret stir deep within each line. Love ever faithful yet lost. Congratulations on your win. We feel our own experiences through your words. Blessings.
Ashley Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 5:55 PM
Dear Jack, your poignant potent pen is brilliant! Mournful emotions so tenderly expressed with an end twist that's so amazing! I adore your style and finesse, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Oh wow, Jack, love this so powerful the emotion the feeling.
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Imagination going in the fast lane. Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 8:37 PM
hmmm, is this imagining you know who?? I really enjoyed this, Jack.
Callus Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 8:42 AM
You describe a serious moment in time with a pinch of black humour, Jack. Even a funeral can end up being pleasant, in a way! ~ Regards // paul
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