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A grateful man has received the gift of love, a person who has made all his dreams come true, for the rest of his life, he would have been thrilled ~~towards precious pearl. He was entwined by the green vine of fondness, the stars were tumbling on his bewildered bed, he was compelled to her powerful savior, ~~cupid~ dart hit him. He believed infinity would protect him yes, if love exists and his hands can undo to scrub a memory, he shall make a mound ~~you~ made this to please.
1St Place Contest Winner Written: August 22, 2021 Your Best Sapphic Stanza Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula Syllables checked by HM.com

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Date: 9/21/2021 8:17:00 PM
Lasaad, as The Word teaches us about resurrections, then how can love be so far away. An admirable piece you've presented my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 8/23/2021 9:33:00 AM
I like how your protagonist was hit with Cupid's dart, not too sure if he realises how lucky he has been, but I found this piece intriguing... This is a difficult contest..Delice Good luck.
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Date: 8/23/2021 9:47:00 AM
You're correct, Delice. It's a difficult contest because the form is not that easy, but I give it a try anyway. Thanks for your comment and wishes.
Date: 8/23/2021 7:15:00 AM
I enjoyed this Lasaad. Very well written :)
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi, for your delightful comment.
Date: 8/23/2021 6:06:00 AM
Lovely story, Lassad. Love everlasting!
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay, for your delightful comment.
Date: 8/23/2021 12:13:00 AM
That's a beautiful story and I enjoyed reading this cute write...
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Supraja, for your comment.
Date: 8/22/2021 10:31:00 PM
And they lived happily everlasting.....
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Victor, for your delightful comment.

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