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Evergreen Candle

Evergreen candle, thoughts flicker with the flame Some things change fast, as they are not the same In a good way, a bright way, shining in front of me Merging with this candle in my watchful eye I see Relaxing in the evening air, gratitude there is to be Filled with a nice scent, flowing straight to me Mesmerized by pleasant thoughts, weaving with light Content with what I share, resting in this night Heidi Sands 8/28/17

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Gary Smith

Date: 8/29/2017 4:42:00 PM

A very calming poem Heidi, lovely :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 4:46:00 PM

So nice to hear Gary. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/29/2017 12:03:00 PM

This is Russell's wife typing in for Russell. He wanted me to stop by and read to him your poem. He then commented, "Wow Heidi, I am impressed by your wonderful write. I have missed your poetry, your write so well. This poem is no different, a masterful piece. I truly loved having this poem read to me this afternoon. great work. Thank you for all your well wishes and kind comments. I really appreciate them. I am doing better, slowly, but am in a lot of pain. I'll be back soon my friend." TY Emma

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 12:09:00 PM

Oh my word. What a surprise! Thank you for reading this to Russell and also posting here for him. I appreciate this so much. He is missed here. Such a kind , enthusiastic person. I have been praying for him to get well. Please let him know that I know what intense pain from injury can feel like. My thoughts are with him for his healing. Take care. Thank you!

Dm Babbit

Date: 8/29/2017 9:37:00 AM

Rest well in the evergreen night. Nicely played.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 9:52:00 AM

Thank you DM :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/29/2017 9:02:00 AM

Very spiritual poem, Heidi. I love the evergreen allusion of this poem. Evergreen represents eternal life ... a most heavenly scent that is. Beautiful thought, beautiful poetry. Love and more love to you and yours.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 9:52:00 AM

I am happy I could share it and you enjoyed it Freddie. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2017 8:45:00 PM

Feels like a pleasant evening!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 6:13:00 AM

Yes it was Vijay, thank you :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/28/2017 7:50:00 PM

A state of serenity of peaceful meditation mind, body, soul. A tranquil, thoughtful and lovely write Heidi. Beautiful flow, rhythm and rhyme. A very pleasurable experience reading your poem this evening! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 6:13:00 AM

Hi Susan. I am so happy it was a pleasure for you to read. Thank you very much :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/28/2017 6:31:00 PM

What a gentle scene! I hope it is your scene. Love your writing.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2017 6:33:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite. Yes, this is my scene tonight. I appreciate your comment. I am happy you enjoy the writing ! :) Peace be with you. :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/28/2017 6:12:00 PM

Sounds very relaxing Heidi...Nicely penned

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/28/2017 6:15:00 PM

It is Joseph. Thank you :)