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Evergreen

Remember when you walked with me, into forests of evergreen? Our makeshift shelter, put together by a canvas in which we painted with our eyes; the stars, close together as we were. Oh, how my heart ached for the rise of constellations, and passion, burned in our hearts like campfires built from blistering hands. Our bodies, wrapped around like a twisted vine tree. And the forest bearing witness to our humble approach. For the wind whispered to the forest that very night, the words you spoke so eloquently, "I love you." The earth heard the news, because the sun rose moments after. And the winds increased pressure intending only to rise with the sun on this joyous occasion. As did my love, for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/16/2016 1:06:00 AM
Christina Caro, nice to see this one again. linda
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Date: 10/5/2015 5:15:00 PM
Christina, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/5/2015 3:15:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Christina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2015 3:49:00 PM
Christina, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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