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Ever-Bright Eyes

There you speak an unspoken word
within the laughs and the cries,
and I hear what goes unheard
deep in your ever-bright eyes.

When I notice you winking
there are no hidden lies,
I know what you are thinking
deep in those ever-bright eyes.

When you look right into mine,
so warmly, like the sun's rise,
I can feel them brighter shine
deep in my ever-bright eyes.

Our hearts are forever contained
in a part of us that never dies,
the soul has always remained,
deep in our ever-bright eyes.





4/26/2014

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Date: 7/13/2014 9:35:00 AM
really nice piece Kelly, a blessing it is to read this fine piece of work.Especially ,ove your last verse as it really says so much that's important, God bless, Gordon
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/16/2014 1:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Gordon! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this poem!.... Have a great day!
Date: 5/28/2014 9:59:00 PM
Kelly, just came to say hi to you. Hubbie is calling for me and I never quite have enough time here!!! thanks for commenting to my recent poetry.
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Date: 5/3/2014 7:09:00 AM
Our hearts are forever contained in a part of us that never dies.....I especially like these two lines..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/4/2014 9:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouraging comments, Sara. I'm happy that you liked this poem. :)
Date: 4/29/2014 9:44:00 PM
HELLOOOOOOOOO Kelly!!! Just saw u had a new poem. Had not been on poetry Soup for weeks!!! I stand by what I said, you never fail to impress!! Great poem. See ya later!!! -Jose
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/1/2014 8:39:00 PM
Hello Jose! It is good to see you here again. Thank you so much for stopping by. Your kind comments are always appreciated. See ya later! :)
Date: 4/28/2014 6:57:00 PM
I love poems about eyes. The windows to the soul and bright eyes are clear and unsullied!!
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Date: 4/27/2014 9:36:00 PM
I love a poem where form I haunches the story line instead of detracts or becomes itself the primary focus. I think you master here how it's supposed to be done. A good mentor for me and a wonderful write all around. As always I appreciate your guidance and encouragement .
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/30/2014 12:58:00 AM
I agree with you, Dave, sometimes a poem's form can be distracting. Form is not always the first thing that I think about when I write a poem, because the content is much more important to me.... Thank you so much for the encouraging comments, as well. I do appreciate it. :)
Date: 4/26/2014 3:49:00 PM
Awesome! Great poem lady :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/28/2014 2:37:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comments, Casarah! :)
Date: 4/26/2014 6:24:00 AM
Kelly, a beautifully craft poem that sings a pretty song beginning to end.. I love it!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2014 3:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dave. That really means a lot coming from you. :)
Date: 4/26/2014 5:16:00 AM
This is going straight into my favourites its beautiful - eyes are the windows to the soul! Hugs Jan x
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for adding my poem to your favorites, Jan! It really means a lot to me. Hugs :)