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Eventide In the Woodland

Wind drifts along a river lined with trees and dances further inland among dew-kissed leaves in the woods to which I have been led while meandering off the beach’s trail. I stand now in a clearing wanting to dance to the wind’s whisperings as in the silken twilight, the sun sinks low. Beneath a cobalt sky now crimson spun, I twirl and twirl until the scarlet of the sky starts to recede. Tall silhouttes surround me. They are the patterns emerging as shadows weave the light that lingers among the woodland’s sheltering trees, whose limbs are long green arms reaching up to glorify the God whose hand now dims the sun. I see cerise and hear it flutter! Two cardinals emerge as the fluttering I heard. Forest creatues murmur from near and from afar. It’s time to quickly head for home. I watch the red birds glide into the eventide. May 10, 2021 For the Nature Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh

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Date: 5/23/2021 5:03:00 AM
An enchanting write, Andrea, I see it won, my heartiest congratulations:)
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Date: 5/19/2021 12:40:00 AM
What a breathtaking reverie of the eventide! It puts one into a state of equanimity of mind and immense peace. Compliments for your placement
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:00:00 AM
A euphoric trailing of idyllic words identifying with nature serendipitously, Andrea, my compliments on your meritorious win my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 5/18/2021 10:41:00 AM
Back with congratulations for your forest reverie my friend! So happy for you!
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Date: 5/18/2021 4:58:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/13/2021 11:18:00 AM
What a serene journey into "eventide" Andrea. Susan was right - it is "dreamy" and like a dream sequence along with its heightened awareness of every detail in your experience. Congratulations on your fine win!
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Date: 5/11/2021 7:36:00 PM
Dear Andrea, congratulations for your excellent win in Regina's contest. The emotions of this poem are expressed with exuberance and are at once both vivid yet so dreamy. Your appreciation for Nature's beauty shines. Simply splendid! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan""
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/11/2021 4:27:00 AM
Congrats sweet friend, I love this! You're so talented! God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/10/2021 4:12:00 PM
Pure enchantment in Mother Nature's glory Andrea. This is a great entry for the contest. I don't know if I will have time to enter this one, but I sure would like to. Have a great week! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/10/2021 3:39:00 PM
A lovely scene with exuberant twirling, murmuring, fluttering and gliding! :) a happy scene! Blessings, Andrea!
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Date: 5/10/2021 11:46:00 AM
I see you here, doing just this Andrea, full health restored "Beneath a cobalt sky now crimson spun, I twirl and twirl until the scarlet of the sky starts to recede."
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/10/2021 2:20:00 PM
oh I need to picture doing this with my health restored. Just pray I can keep holding on for my cure!! thanks, Caren.
Date: 5/10/2021 10:38:00 AM
Such a beautiful picture of the nature and the sunset at a river you have described here Andrea!! I truly enjoyed reading it!!
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Date: 5/10/2021 10:04:00 AM
Awesome...so beautiful with imagery Andrea.. I saw some wonderful alliterations too... Best wishes in the contest... I hope you are fine... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/10/2021 10:02:00 AM
Masterful write, Andrea - my kind of poetry. A top contest winner for certain - Bob H
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Date: 5/10/2021 8:45:00 AM
Fantastic images in nature, so beautifully-penned. Andrea, you have such a creative spirit, and your poems are always worth two and three reads. I loved it.
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Date: 5/10/2021 7:08:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful! Your vivid descriptions of the scene take me there!! A fave for me!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/10/2021 4:10:00 PM
wow, thanks for the fave!
Date: 5/10/2021 4:58:00 AM
A beautiful nature painting Andrea. Enjoyed the imagery you created.
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Date: 5/10/2021 2:19:00 AM
You penned a superb poem, dear Andrea; your words resonate with the sounds of nature Good luck in the contest, have a wonderful Monday
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