Eventide In the Woodland

Wind drifts along a river lined with trees
and dances further inland among dew-kissed leaves
in the woods to which I have been led
while meandering off the beach’s trail.

I stand now in a clearing
wanting to dance to the wind’s whisperings
as in the silken twilight, the sun sinks low.
Beneath a cobalt sky now crimson spun,
I twirl and twirl
until the scarlet of the sky starts to recede.

Tall silhouttes surround me.
They are the patterns emerging
as shadows weave the light that lingers
among the woodland’s sheltering trees,
whose limbs are long green arms
reaching up to glorify the God
whose hand now dims the sun.

I see cerise and hear it flutter!
Two cardinals emerge 
as the fluttering I heard.
Forest creatues murmur from near
and from afar.
It’s time to quickly head for home.
I watch the red birds glide
into the eventide.

May 10, 2021 
For the Nature Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Daniel Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 5:03 AM
An enchanting write, Andrea, I see it won, my heartiest congratulations:)
Pathak Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 12:40 AM
What a breathtaking reverie of the eventide! It puts one into a state of equanimity of mind and immense peace. Compliments for your placement
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:00 AM
A euphoric trailing of idyllic words identifying with nature serendipitously, Andrea, my compliments on your meritorious win my friend, Aloha!
Kauffman Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Back with congratulations for your forest reverie my friend! So happy for you!
Alex Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:58 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 11:18 AM
What a serene journey into "eventide" Andrea. Susan was right - it is "dreamy" and like a dream sequence along with its heightened awareness of every detail in your experience. Congratulations on your fine win!
Ashley Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Dear Andrea, congratulations for your excellent win in Regina's contest. The emotions of this poem are expressed with exuberance and are at once both vivid yet so dreamy. Your appreciation for Nature's beauty shines. Simply splendid! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan""
Alex Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Congratulations!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:27 AM
Congrats sweet friend, I love this! You're so talented! God bless you always, Love, Gina
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Pure enchantment in Mother Nature's glory Andrea. This is a great entry for the contest. I don't know if I will have time to enter this one, but I sure would like to. Have a great week! Blessings xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 3:39 PM
A lovely scene with exuberant twirling, murmuring, fluttering and gliding! :) a happy scene! Blessings, Andrea!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 11:46 AM
I see you here, doing just this Andrea, full health restored "Beneath a cobalt sky now crimson spun, I twirl and twirl until the scarlet of the sky starts to recede."
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:20 PM
oh I need to picture doing this with my health restored. Just pray I can keep holding on for my cure!! thanks, Caren.
Kulkarni Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Such a beautiful picture of the nature and the sunset at a river you have described here Andrea!! I truly enjoyed reading it!!
Jayasankar Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Awesome...so beautiful with imagery Andrea.. I saw some wonderful alliterations too... Best wishes in the contest... I hope you are fine... Hugs... ~ Ani
Hinshaw Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Masterful write, Andrea - my kind of poetry. A top contest winner for certain - Bob H
Hankins Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 8:45 AM
Fantastic images in nature, so beautifully-penned. Andrea, you have such a creative spirit, and your poems are always worth two and three reads. I loved it.
Brul Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful! Your vivid descriptions of the scene take me there!! A fave for me!
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:10 PM
wow, thanks for the fave!
Pandit Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:58 AM
A beautiful nature painting Andrea. Enjoyed the imagery you created.
Poet Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:19 AM
You penned a superb poem, dear Andrea; your words resonate with the sounds of nature Good luck in the contest, have a wonderful Monday
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