Evening Well Spent

Where did you fly off too bird,
the trees where your babies live?
New camera was out of focus,
but I heard the squawking loud enough.
Mother came out ringing the dinner bell;
did she know of the crimson sunset?
With the sound of birds in my ears,
I ran to the rice bowls, hot and ready.
Chopsticks in her hands - she first asked
how I fared in my adventures.
The birds were quiet, the sunset now violet;
I ate it all, but was still hungry for the woods outside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 12:45 PM
beautifully painted timothy love how you drew the imaginary in this excellent pen dear friend
Hicks Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Thanks Liam, my friend!
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December 2, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Timothy, you are lucky that you hunger for more than material bodily food! Nature and its beauty can provide ample nourishment to those with fine tastes! A 7 rating for you. // paul
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December 11, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Why thanks Paul... much obliged :)
Buil Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 12:45 PM
This is so very cute. When you're young the world is such an amazing and adventure place to wander. Disappointing when you're called out from a place that brings so much excitement to reality.
Hicks Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:23 PM
When you are little every little thing is a new experience... I believe that's why a whole 24 hour day seemed like so much longer back then. But maybe we can keep our childlike wonder by trying new experiences :)
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Very good, those babies are always hungry no matter what time it is, and nature is always peaceful no matter the season. 7
Hicks Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Right you are Eve!
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December 1, 2014 at 9:04 PM
What is life but a balance between nourishment and exertion, exchanges betwixt love and new wonder. I love the Mother spirit in this poem, the soul quest is so subtle with mystery Timothy. This poem means a lot to me for I listen and watch the outside much. J.A.B.
Hicks Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Glad it resonated with you, friend! This poem of mine was simplistic in language, though I aimed for subtlety, and alluded to something grander.
Bauer Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 5:54 AM
this is beautiful and very poetic!
Hicks Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Thank you Ilene!
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December 1, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Im always hungry for the woods with its nature and sunsets..Lovely imagery Timothy.
Hicks Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Thanks Charmaine!
Hamilton Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 2:57 AM
lovely yearnings abound in your delightful poem Tim hugs
Hicks Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 12:19 PM
Thanks for your visit Shadow! :)
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