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Evening Sky

enchanted is this evening sky so here we stand just you and i stars aplenty the moon less shy its image on the water wry the wind it sends a breathless sigh this night it seems is passing by a long embrace as time draws nigh a tear it forms within my eye as lips caress a kiss goodbye January 12, 2020

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/17/2021 7:20:00 PM

I enjoy reading your poems. This is very powerful. Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2021 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/romantic "evening sky" write. Love It. Have a blessed day.................

Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2020 10:39:00 AM

Lovely and romantic, Sandra. A smooth flowing Monorhyme. ~ Congratulations on your podium finish! Hugs // paul

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 10:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/16/2020 7:07:00 AM

Congrats my friend on your placement in this contest. I am so happy to see this poem floating to the top.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 9:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris...whenever a rhyming poem wins it makes me smile extra wide...as do all your kind comments :) hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/15/2020 3:21:00 PM

A tender moment unfolds here beautifully Sandra and thanks for your participation and my compliments on your placement~@wk

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 7:17:00 PM

wow... thank you so much William...i struggle with rhymes but have been working on them...i am pleased you felt it worthy of a win :) hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/13/2020 12:21:00 PM

A perfect romantic monorhyme Sandra. Good luck. Tom.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/13/2020 6:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom... i still struggle with these rhymes but practice eventually makes one better :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/13/2020 8:15:00 AM

Another beauty from your pen my friend. This not only rhymes wonderfully, the flow is smooth and almost song like. Best wishes in the contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/13/2020 10:10:00 AM

Thank you...not so sure i am happy with it and thought of deleting it...sure it won't place... it took me forever to write and i was constantly moving the order of the lines... but thank you for your kind words... hugs