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Evening Poetic Musings

Poetry Musings at Sundown Where did this day go? Did it run down the street? It slipped through my fingers, Like a glowing, rose, satiny sheet. Up before sunrise, a quill in my hand. Is this line good..hmm..is it bad? Who am I writing for? The truth is, I am still learning. In a thought machine, I get locked. I am no rabid commenter. Not even a poetess divine, I simply cannot do it all. Just know when evening knocks, I simply lay down my quill and say That ith humility and equanimity, "Thank you God, I can do no more."              June 16,2020                 5pm PST Poem # 1'247

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Date: 6/19/2020 6:39:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, okay I have found this poem.We all have out limitations. We can dram of how our next day will turn out. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs Darlene xxx-ooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/20/2020 8:20:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes dreams do count. I just wish my dream would come true. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/19/2020 6:49:00 PM
Ho Darleme..Goid you found it. Dreams count.... Panagiota xoxixoxo
Date: 6/17/2020 10:24:00 AM
We can only do what we can do, living within our means and limitations. Days are for enjoying and as we lie at the end of the day we can reflect and question our actions on how we can make the next day better. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/17/2020 11:39:00 AM
I love, love your idea of personal responsibility. It's so true, at days end, hopefully we can see what we did right. Or~ things we might have improved upon, Tom We never grow blaming others. It keeps us mental midgets, worse people who do not know who they are. A loss, indeed. Panagiota xoxo

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