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Evening Comes

Evening comes with a quiet softness. Welcome after the day's many demands. Dinnertime has come and gone. A sigh of relief, anticipating the next few relaxing hours. Watching the sun as it appears to be slowly sinking into the ocean. Also getting it's well deserved rest, known to be an early riser. The beach, deserted, but for a few seagulls. This is my time of day, my favorite time. Walking in the surf, shoes in my hand. Lifting my face to feel the evening breeze caress my cheek. The only sound, waves breaking as they touch the shore. I can walk and walk, not realizing how far. I stay until the darkness reminds me it is late. But a full moon, reflected on the water, will light my way. As I make my way home along the path. I feel a sense of peace and quiet solitude. The evening, my time of day, my favorite time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/29/2018 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Sandra. Your description of the beach at twilight is beautiful and it's my favorite time too. The moon was full last night and it was very bright here. Your package is in the mail and I'll Soup Mail the tracking number. Hugs, Carolyn
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/29/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn, it is a beautiful subject to write about. Thanks for the mail update.
Date: 6/26/2018 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful poem. Well done!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/26/2018 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Susan for your comment and congrats. Always appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2018 9:01:00 AM
Felt like I was there. Congratulations
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/26/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Shirley, I am so glad that it made you feel that way.
Date: 6/25/2018 5:20:00 PM
Oh, Sandy, congrats on another first place. I knew this was an exceptional write! John
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/25/2018 11:01:00 PM
Have been outside working with the landscaping. Came in to find the results. Thank you for the congrats, you were right. Based on your response to this one, I submitted it. I dedicate the win to you, John. Thank you for picking a winner.
Date: 6/25/2018 1:44:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sandra! I felt the relaxation reading this. Thanks for sharing :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/25/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi, Trying to work on imagery and adding beauty to my words. So glad you felt the relaxation.
Date: 6/24/2018 11:55:00 AM
Sandy, I love the upbeat relaxing air to this verse. The imagery so exquisite I felt like I was there. This my dear friend is truly a gem. I fave for me. Nicely done! John
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/24/2018 1:04:00 PM
WOW!!! THANK YOU!! I have a really big grin on my face, what a wonderful and enthusiastic comment! I am so happy that one of my poems brought this response, makes it special. So nice to know you have a favorite now. I wanted to write "The Poem", one that is above the rest. Maybe this is it. Thank you so much my friend, you made my day, my week, maybe my month! : )

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