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Even the Angels Wept

instead of flowers stones bloom in mass profusion engraved with honor….. history has come to rest locked in the shadows of time _ echoed from the past the foreboding sound of guns thunders from the sky... lamented tears of angels scatter over sacred ground _ far from battlefields, all creatures mourn the endless silent sacrifice... grief still mingles in the breeze with the sounds of a bugle
_______________________________________________ 5/4/16 Contest: "Even The Angels Wept" Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 5/14/2016 7:09:00 PM
oh, now I see. you broke up the tanka into two parts each.Very interesting, Carrie, and i see you chose a theme similar to the one I did for this contest. the murder of innocents from war. glad I finally saw this one.
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Date: 5/6/2016 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem Carrie!
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