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Perhaps memories are mere drops dripping from life that splash upon impoverished floors hidden in the mind swept away by shadows sweeping through lonely nights leaving nothing but streetlamp dreams and unfulfilled wishes that may have been real in a twilight realm of another time even so, your memory burns like an eternal flame lit long ago 6/18/18 contest When line six is a perfect fix

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Date: 6/23/2018 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Frederic, beautiful imagery :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/23/2018 3:29:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Frederic for your wonderful win with your impassioned poem of lost love. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wonderful.
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Date: 6/20/2018 6:54:00 PM
- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you Frederic :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)
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Date: 6/20/2018 3:42:00 PM
Great rhymes Frederic.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/19/2018 12:35:00 PM
how the air of affection ignites your muse, frederic... i like the mellow tones of this poem; so splendid.. huggs
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Date: 6/19/2018 6:19:00 AM
This is so nice Frederic! A beauty!! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 6/18/2018 6:03:00 PM
Oh Frederic I just love this poem, so full of lost love passion, yearning and intense emotional imagery.. 'streetlamp dreams and unfulfilled wishes'.. so wistful! You may have exceeded the 'standard set' my talented friend... I love your last line as well, powerful expression. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/18/2018 7:40:00 PM
My friend, I predict that this write will be a first place winner with your deep emotional and melancholy imagery.. if there was a standard set this could easily top it! :))
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/18/2018 6:17:00 PM
thank you, my friend, you have set the bar rather high though

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