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Evacuation Route

To evacuation route, traffic flowing Into the hurricane eye, one traveler Going opposite way on lonely road concur Into the storm, scary, dark, wind blowing Then eye_out comes the sun brightly glowing At once milder storm but traveler won't transfer To evacuation route Traveler presses on lonely route growing Avoiding in life any wide tracks or spur That will lead to wrong life be saboteur Easy path alluring_many get going To evacuation route Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Rondine The Traffic Of Life Written by: Sara Kendrick Date: July 23, 2012

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Date: 8/9/2012 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations my dear, Sarah. This is really an excellent poem. God bless you and your family, always.
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:59:00 PM
Sara ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:39:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations,Sara!
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:51:00 PM
Very nice Sara!Congrats on the win!!
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:23:00 PM
Wonderful and excellent write,Sara..Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:22:00 PM
Sara, congrats on your win...well done..David
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Date: 8/1/2012 12:50:00 PM
Excellent lines of imagery...yes, some do take the most difficult path. Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/1/2012 9:56:00 AM
congrats Sara on a splendid write and win for this wonderful work of art luv.. also thankxx for supporting my contest..
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Date: 8/1/2012 9:01:00 AM
the racy feel lends itself to lyrical flow... sweet congrats on your win in my contest, sara... very unique!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:25:00 AM
nicely done Sara......congrats on your win
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara xx
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Date: 7/23/2012 2:51:00 PM
Made me think of New Orleans Levies breaking and the choas ensuing. Must have been a lot of people thinking about their evacuation route and method of survival
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Date: 7/23/2012 2:46:00 PM
You've done excellent with this spectacular write my friend! What a fabulous poem, you have created a wonderfully crafted poem! I really enjoyed reading your poem today Sara! What a wondrous piece! Great Work!!
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