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“Spring wakes us, nutures us, and revitalizes us. How often does your spring come? If you are prisoner of the calendar, it comes but once a year. If you are creating authentic power, it comes frequently, or very frequently." Gary Zukav
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dawn breaks. In the depths of winter’s despair, a tiny bud emerges, unaware. With each passing day, it grows, a symbol of hope, a renewal that shows. At the bottom of my own despair I find solace in the whispers of springtime air. With each breath, I let go of the pain, renewal washing over me like gentle spring rain. Like a butterfly emerging from its cocoon, I shed my old self and embrace the new; Renewal is my guiding light, a chance to take flight. Like a flower blooming in the spring, I embrace renewal, a new beginning. With each petal, a layer is shed a chance to grow, to let my wings spread. Like a phoenix rising from the ashes, I emerge stronger, shedding past clashes. Renewal is my armor, my shield, a chance to heal, a chance to yield. Like a river flowing to the sea, I let go of what no longer serves me. Renewal is my constant companion, a chance to find peace, a chance to abandon. In the depths of my soul’s unrest, I find renewal in nature’s behest. With each springtime, a new beginning, a chance to let go, a chance to keep winning. As the sun sets on yesterday’s sorrow, a new dawn breaks, promising tomorrows. With each breath, I let go of the past, Embracing the present, renewing at last.

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Date: 4/8/2024 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations dear Sara.
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:33:00 AM
Dear sara, this is so heartfelt and so beautiful how youv expressed throughout in a very sincere and eloquent manner. I especially love the lines “ Like a river flowing to the sea,” “ Like a flower blooming in the spring,” “ Like a butterfly emerging from its cocoon,“ “ At the bottom of my own despair I find solace in the whispers of springtime air. With each breath, I let go of the pain,“ absolutely gorgeous rhymes and rhythm and such profound emotions and imagery! You definitely have a very feminine and delicate way of expressing! Pleasure reading this! Thank you for sharing this. Congratulations on your win.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/8/2024 4:53:00 AM
dearest Ink--I'm grateful for your visit and for your mindful and kind comments, especially the ones about the similes and the rhythm within the poem. Your words are so heartfelt and sincere. Thank you..also thanks for your congratulatory words. Delighted with the 1st place placement. Thank you! Wishing you a splendid day, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/20/2024 4:40:00 PM
Beautiful- I can relate to this one
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/20/2024 5:11:00 PM
wonderful...glad you could relate to this poem...nothing better than that to say to a poet. Grateful indeed, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/19/2024 12:16:00 AM
I cannot tell how much l love this poem. Only a person who longs for renewal becomes better in life. However perfect a person be, there is scope for improvement. In the same way however doomed one is, there is chance for redemption. Spring is the time of renewal on earth. Renewal is indeed a chance to take flight. Dear Sara, as l don't have enough time, l cut short my appreciation. This is indeed my FAVE.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/19/2024 3:48:00 AM
your comments were meaningful and highly appreciated. Thank you for reading my moment and for your insights about renewal which is the scope of the poem. I'm humbly grateful for your fav...thanks from the bottom of my heart, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/18/2024 11:04:00 AM
Such a heartwarming read dear Sara and so many beautiful poetic lines to admire here as the glorious season begins its renewal which profoundly affects you too as you emerge with more hope and strength as you shed the past to embrace the future. I love the imagery here, the similes and metaphors that paint such a vivid picture. The last stanza is so profound. The whole poem was captivating. Loved it. Good luck in the contest. I’m sure it will be placed highly. Hugs and blessings xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 5:43:00 PM
I'm grateful for your encouraging comments, Christina. You 'got' the poem and appreciated the techniques I used to pain the picture I was hoping to create. I'm also glad you saw the profundity of the last stanza. Thank you. I appreciate your visit and for wishing for me a contest win. That would be lovely. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/18/2024 11:00:00 AM
Renewal and resurrection in the spirit of spring. Excellent write.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 5:41:00 PM
thank you for your kind and thoughtful words, Jay. I appreciate you and your visits. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 3/18/2024 7:51:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Sara - (I tried this contest... but couldn't figure out how to write it... it turned out to be a "shape" poem... and not for the contest :) - Best wishes in the contest. .. hope this tops the winners list :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 5:40:00 PM
thanks for dropping by and for reading and commenting on my poem. I struggled with this contest as well. Tried three different forms and threw them all away. I hesitated as I posted this because I wasn't sure if it met the contest criteria. Oh well, the deed is done. Thanks for your encouraging words about a contest win. I appreciate your ongoing support. enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/18/2024 7:39:00 AM
Simply put, just Brilliant Sara! So many wonderful emotive lines! You are quite a talent!!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 7:44:00 AM
wow, thank you for your enthusiastic comments. I'm most appreciative! Have a splendid day, Sara

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