Eternity Ring

The heart that beats, I love you- mumurs ,promise true

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2009 11:58:00 AM

Nicely done. We all hope that is true in all our relationships. Keep writing. Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/12/2009 8:06:00 PM

very sweet, Brian... jim

P Sheart

Date: 10/12/2009 8:06:00 AM

Beautiful sentiments Brian. A lovely fibonacci!! Take care Have a inspiring week! Love Light Truth Patricia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2009 8:02:00 AM

So much truth here, Brian. Thank you for sharing this great fibonacci! Love, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/12/2009 7:14:00 AM

Brian this is excellent - A beating heart full of love is the one true promise given us by the Lord - I want to thank you for the honor of winning that wonderful contest that you ran and let you know I received the book Saturday - Hopefully I can further strengthen my knowledge and subsequent poetry with it - God Bless you my friend, MJ

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/12/2009 5:38:00 AM

This is so lovely, Brian! Beautiful and endearing sentiment. Thank you for your thoughtful comments today! Love, Robin

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/12/2009 5:31:00 AM

beautiful!