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Essence of Me

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to you I surrendered the essence of my being from hidden depths unearthed forsaken tokens without guile in artless exposure offered secret parts of me I gave no other game to dance and ritual made vulnerable stirring dreams in the dark of night you come to visit as lovers inevitably do free to roam the distant realms AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on July 18, 2021

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Jcb Brul

Date: 7/21/2021 12:59:00 AM

A sublime write that touches the very core. Brilliant!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/21/2021 3:40:00 AM

thank you for the lovely comment, JCB ~

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/20/2021 10:35:00 AM

Romance at its very best..Well done...Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/20/2021 3:27:00 PM

Thank you so much, Delice ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/19/2021 6:47:00 PM

So intimate, loving, and yielding, Line. A treasure. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/20/2021 3:28:00 PM

Thank you very much, Gershon ~

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/19/2021 3:30:00 AM

You opened your poem with a bang. A lovely composition of love and romance. Loved it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/19/2021 6:21:00 AM

Thank you very much, Victor ~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/19/2021 2:47:00 AM

Wonderful writing. God bless you. Love, Gina

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/19/2021 6:21:00 AM

Thank you, Gina ~

Carol Mays

Date: 7/18/2021 8:18:00 PM

"free to roam the distant realms" --love this description of the expanse of consciousness and imagination. At least that's what I think it means. Great poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/19/2021 1:32:00 AM

Thank you very much, Carol ~