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Chauvinistic men with a false sense of pride drum their chests repeatedly like a gorilla standing upright arrogantly proclaiming themselves the kings of the universe bragging to anyone who would listen how men run the world and hold it up like Atlas. They sure love to boast. They'd boast about anything under the sun: how fast they can run, the command of their voice, how many pounds of iron they can pump; all the while marginalizing, underestimating, and insulting women; putting them in boxes. They believe that women belong in the kitchen. That they can't do all the things that men can; gloating how they can piss while standing and women can't. But who gave birth To these ersatz men? Who potty-trained them? Exactly! Date written: 07/19/2020

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Date: 7/19/2020 8:24:00 PM
A very satiating chuckle rumbled out of me at the end of this read.Thank you, I needed that ;), xomo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/19/2020 8:44:00 PM
You're welcome, Pidge:-) Glad this one tickled your funny bone!
Date: 7/19/2020 7:27:00 PM
Oh, you've nailed the wicked truth! Nicely done, Edward ~ Her Satz
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/19/2020 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon:-) Most appreciated.

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