Erosion 1 and 2

Erosion - 1

With a scholar eye I am looking at-

Looking at Sharpened Dream,
Burning heart burning across
Feeling the sour, feeling the layer

Is being wet tongue, gradually uncovered
vibrating lips and stick while mixing at liquor

-	A chemical compound searching for eyes
-	Searching liberty from sin
-	Burning the recipe of purity

I am chewing all the glamour with tortured eyes
Breathing fragrance; 

breathing easily passing days and nights
Easily

being tortured, told her- 
As its an erosion ; it’s a feelings


Written by Javed Akter

Erosion – 2

Sharp Sunshine ; I become anxious
sharpened me while it touches 
the ground

Like homeless lives I search forever
Blue ; blue feelings always
Walking around

Always sliding doors are crawling 
Crawling ever now and then

Kindly me; myself kind while waking up
After long night sleepless; sleeveless 
From deadly bed

Changing everything; changing backbone slowly
Steadily this side and that
Every time looking at decay

-Decay altering the sides

my feelings ; herself towards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:18 AM
JAVED, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:51 PM
Javed, ENJOYED.. Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
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November 9, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Hi, I am a fellow Bangladeshi writer, new in this site. Please check out my poems that I posted here. Please also check out my debut book “The Mystic Inferno”, available in Dhaka’s book stores. Let me know your thoughts. Greatly appreciate that. Regards, Obaidur Rahman
Akter Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 1:47 AM
Thanks Crystal and other friends in the poetry soup for inspiring me. For Crystal : I am not that famous Lyricist Javed Akhtar from India, I am from Bangladesh. I usually write Bengali Poems.
Lambert Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 12:50 AM
This poem is reeli beautiful......!! Classy write....! this shows a great deal of proffesionalism and maturity......International piece of work....!! Condgradzzz.....! by the way javed, r u that famous lyricist from India??
Fraser Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured> James
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Congrats Javed on being featured this week. Vince
Tugaff Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 11:57 PM
Co ngratulations on your poem being feautred and making it to the semi finals. Ernilando
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May 31, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Javed, Congratulations on having your poem, "Erosion 1 and2" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"
Spence Sr Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 11:50 AM
Hello Javed, great job and best wishes in the next round. ~Joseph
Akter Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 9:45 PM
Thanks all for your valuable supports. Hope i can make it more and more.
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Javed, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Good luck in the contest, Javed
Brown Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Javed. Love, Carol
Akter Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 1:12 AM
Thanks Friends for Your Valuable Support in my writing !! Hope you will post more details comments for me and my poetry.
Jordan Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 9:57 AM
Javed - Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round, best of luck in the finals – God Bless, MJ
Mcdougal Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 9:40 PM
Wow...How very teen angst of you. Listen to The Used much?
Yamin Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 11:35 AM
Congrats Javed on your enchanting poem winning the First Round at the PoetrySoup. I wish you success in the finals. You are a talented poet. I quote a Quatrain from my book 'Rubaiyat of Josh Malihabadi -A Drop and the Ocean': Men who recite their verses profound/ And in their hearts conceal a bleeding wound/ Are insight and vision of worlds beyond/ Those who translate their thoughts in sound. -Mohammad
George   Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 5:53 PM
Very unique!!! Congratulations on your win, Jayed. lainie
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January 7, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Interesting format to share your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it chosen as one of the winners in the contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations Javed on being chosen a winner in the September contest. Vince
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol
Akter Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 7:34 PM
Thanks all for their support and comments.
Richards Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 2:47 PM
This was amazing, and well deserved to be among the finalists! Congratulations, Javed!! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Javed - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ
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