Erin's Autumn

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The scent of the sea in Erin's cool air
Captivates me and I wish I were there.

Such colors displayed in ivy that crawls
Weaving its way over ancient rock walls.

I recall my awe of every hue
The last time I bid sweet Erin adieu.

I felt embraced by Autumn's breezy arms
When deeply engaged by all of her charms.

Pipes that were played in a passing parade,
Impassioned mem'ries over hill and glade,

Help to remind me that once long ago
My ancestors lived, yet had to let go.

They journeyed across the turbulent sea
To reach a new land in home of the free.

I always rejoice in songs we still sing
When feelings return that fall colors bring.

 © Connie Marcum Wong

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[1]Poets and nineteenth-century Irish nationalists used Erin in English as a romantic name for Ireland.[2] Often, "Erin's Isle" was used. In this context, along with Hibernia, Erin is the name given to the female personification of Ireland, but the name was rarely used as a given name, probably because no saints, queens, or literary figures were ever called Erin. [3]According to Irish mythology and folklore, the name was originally given to the island by the Milesians after the goddess Ériu.

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Date: 12/21/2016 12:20:00 AM
This poem fill one with nostalgia and the loaded history of the Irish in New York. Lovely piece
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Date: 10/28/2016 4:08:00 PM
You have captured and conveyed the essence of autumn in Ireland in this beautiful masterpiece, dear Connie. Lainey
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Date: 10/15/2016 9:03:00 AM
A perfect piece. Makes me want to visit Ireland. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/5/2016 2:28:00 PM
it's a beautiful write Connie you embraced wonderful imagery. LINDA
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/5/2016 6:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Linda. I appreciate your visit. ; )
Date: 10/2/2016 2:18:00 PM
Descriptive and captivating, Connie; must also add informative! You rejoice in song...we can rejoice in your poetic words:) Regards // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/2/2016 7:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul. My mother had a wonderful singing voice and she used to sing Danny Boy and other songs. I miss that. Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 10/2/2016 12:44:00 PM
Where do I begin? The imagery is a 7+, outrageously beautiful. The intelligence, the sentiment, the longing, the respect, the sense I am given of a great and proud Irish people forced to partake of an unknown journey in hope of freedom then deprived them--and to manifest, some of the greatest patriots and fighters this America has ever embraced.... All in this great tribute of yours. Outstanding write, Connie!!
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Date: 10/2/2016 7:29:00 PM
Your comment made me feel so honored Joe. Thank your for all the lovely things you said about my poem. I greatly appreciate it. Aloha, Connie ; )
Date: 10/2/2016 8:28:00 AM
This is absolute excellent, my friend. It is lovely and I enjoyed reading it...........A.M.
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Date: 10/2/2016 2:12:00 PM
So much! Not slouch. This kindle (electronic device) is driving me crazy. It changes my words and I don't notice, and then I click send and I see the mistake.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/2/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thank slouch Afolabi! Sorry Andrew's comment jumped up to your poem . ; )
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/2/2016 1:49:00 PM
It is a tie between Hawaii and Ireland Andrea, which place I love most. Thanks a lot. ; )
Date: 10/1/2016 8:03:00 PM
this is beautiful, Connie. and I love how you gave us the little history lesson beneath. I know how much you love this lovely island!
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Date: 10/2/2016 1:51:00 PM
It is a tie between Hawaii and Ireland Andrea, which place I love most. Thanks a lot. ; )
Date: 10/1/2016 6:54:00 PM
Hi Connie, This is a beautiful and well written piece. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Lovely poem about Ireland. A Big seven:-)Alexis PS. Thanks for the foot notes. It allows the reader to have a deeper understanding of the poem.
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Date: 10/1/2016 1:32:00 PM
So beautiful. An absolute pleasure to read from the first to the last word.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/1/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Armand. So nice to see a visit from you! : )
Date: 10/1/2016 3:18:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem about Ireland, Connie :) Nice name- Erin:) I'm glad for the information:)
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:05:00 PM
First, you have once again set off my poem excitement spot by weaving so many pure poetic ingredients together. Lovely poem, lovely imagery and vibrant emotion. A gem, my dear friend. Second, thank you for edifying me. While reading I wondered if I were the only reader who hadn't a clue where Erin was. I first noticed Erin as a popular name in the 80's and wonder if any so named know the source of said name. How's that sentence? Truly sparked me with this one ... CayCay
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Date: 9/30/2016 4:16:00 PM
Very pretty, I enjoyed the read....BG
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Date: 9/30/2016 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful poem Connie, really enjoyed the read.
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Date: 9/30/2016 3:19:00 PM
I love your poem Mrs Connie, I have always been enchanted with Ireland. Maybe someday...
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:52:00 PM
A beautiful poem Connie. I never knew the Erin reference. We have so many Erin's here in our Irish community.
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful descriptive write Connie and I loved the information at the end... the poem made me smile as we have a village on our Island called Port Erin and also Erin is the name of a lovely care worker or mum's:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:47:00 PM
- The lines are with a lot of emotion - A lovely poem, Connie :) - Happy weekend, enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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