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?erehW ?tahW .a sram morf erutaerc a saw ecno erehT-A .a srats neewteb dnuora gnippiz saw ehS-A .b ytsug emaceb sdniw raloS-B .b "ytsurT elO” dednall ehs oS-B .a --raazab s’eetsurt citsym, citsur a tA-A (SEE THE TRANSLATION BELOW!) Inspired by Carolyn Devonshire's Out of this World poetry contest. BIG SMILES! NOTE: TODAY WAS OUR LUCKY DAY! I WAS SKIMMING THROUGH AN OLD MILITARY JOURNAL FROM NEW MEXICO AND FOUND AN ADVERTISEMENT ABOUT AN ALIEN LANGUAGE TRANSLATOR. Even though I knew it could be risky to make contact, I did. It took a lot of courage, but it worked out very well. I met with him and inquired about having the limerick translated. There was no hostility and the mission has been accomplished. (Just in case you have not yet deciphered the message, I have included a copy below.) What? Where? There once was a creature from mars. She was zipping around between stars. Solar winds became gusty. So she landed “Ole Trusty” At a rustic, mystic trustee's bazaar-- Good luck with all of those alien messages that you will be receiving. HAVE FUN MOST OF ALL! © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 23, 2010 Poetic form: Limerick

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Date: 3/24/2010 10:01:00 PM
Hey Dane Ann, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Thanks for commenting on my poems. ... I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me......Jimmy
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Date: 3/23/2010 7:39:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem in the Limerick contest.. great write and well deserved win for u to so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:58:00 AM
Good one here Dane- Ann, I was almost ready to go get a mirror to read it, as I already have severe dyslexia. Congrats
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Date: 3/21/2010 9:47:00 PM
Great fun Dane Ann! Congrats on your win...
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:09:00 PM
Awesome job on this great Limerick Dane. This shows such witticism. Awesome job. Congratulations on your success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/20/2010 2:07:00 AM
You never run out of good ideas, Dane Ann, you always bring a joy on us. Lively and realistic of this Limerick. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/19/2010 5:33:00 PM
Well you certainly went above and beyond. Very funny. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/19/2010 3:07:00 PM
CONGRATS! my friend! extremely creative and original! what I would expect from you! love, jimbo
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest, very creative may i say >> James
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:50:00 AM
I'm glad you added the translation, Dane Ann. I was going nuts trying to read this one! Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2010 9:28:00 AM
An amazing Job Dane, you've laid us all in the shade. Smile, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:36:00 PM
Very clever here!! Good luck in Caroline's contest!!
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