Equity Breeds Peace

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Providence to satisfy all craw each and everyone having his own straw content, is all beaks to close anger’s leaks tranquility then visits in raw.

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Alex Cullen

Date: 4/28/2018 9:22:00 PM

Simple yet profound, excellent.

Funom Makama
Date: 4/30/2018 8:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Alex

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/9/2017 8:29:00 PM

Have we really progressed or regressed? Well written, Funom.

Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 7:06:00 AM

I think we are regressing.. Thank you so much Kiser

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 7/5/2017 7:48:00 AM

I love your limerick and the telling picture you chose to make your point. There are so many leaks in today's society anger is raw in some communities, but 'equality' is still the name of the game even though it can be so unfair. Amitiés:)

Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 7:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Marie

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/4/2017 9:44:00 AM

Great limerick and illustration, Funom:)

Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 7:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Daniel

James Inman

Date: 7/4/2017 9:41:00 AM

A very clever and insightful poem Funom. It made me think.

Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 7:04:00 AM

Thank you so much James