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I encountered a revered sage, exploring the globe's tones and rage, the sweeps of craft and culture, charm, and sight, to typically collect epitomes. fasten your jeer, he urged, hours, days, fragments, and parts are gone, given in surplus as a pioneer for songs and gates, that of epitomes. always a bleak start, always motion; a fuller loop being drawn, always the peak or the split, to clearly try again, epitomes, epitomes
Written: June 23, 2022

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Date: 7/3/2022 10:49:00 AM
The epitomes will always change as do we and all that lives. Sage writing my friend. Bill
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Date: 6/25/2022 4:23:00 PM
So moving, I especially like 'a pioneer for songs and gates' - we are so drawn to epitomes!
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Date: 6/24/2022 5:42:00 AM
You convey so well my friend wisdom of the sage through your carefully chosen words. A life lesson you deliver, Lassad: always a bleak start, always motion; a fuller loop being drawn, always the peak or the split, to clearly try again.
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Date: 6/24/2022 3:37:00 AM
Great imagery. The epitome of beauty.
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