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Eos - Call of the Dawn

On the seventh ray Of the fourteenth sun Death hath come twofold Arose a Titan in this age Amidst this nimbus looms darkness Betwixt the ash and sage Approach cyclical ritual Dousing wings in feral flames Latent gravidity does surmise For upon my resurrection Eos I shall rise

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James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 5/18/2020 6:57:00 AM

Brilliance shines your words as the Sun in the sky. Thank you for sharing this delightful write which encompasses the stars that shine so bright... a" fav" for me welcome to... the Soup James

Thomas Wells

Date: 5/17/2020 9:42:00 PM

Such wonderful mythic power here! This is like a fragment of a larger story that I want to finish. Thank you.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/5/2017 1:13:00 PM

Awesome poem ... Phoenix from the fire and ash rose melts into blazing heights above new birth, mystical life had chose power gained from unstoppable love. Love your fine poem.. A fav..

Anastasia Stewart

Date: 6/13/2017 5:25:00 PM

What a beautiful piece, I admire your choice of words and imagery!

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 6/13/2017 9:12:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. :)

Shreastha Vyas

Date: 6/13/2017 1:04:00 AM

Nice lines

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 6/13/2017 9:11:00 PM

Thank you so much! :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/11/2017 2:29:00 PM

A very beautiful written poem, i really enjoyed reading it, welcome to poetry soup I really hope you should enjoy your visit here however I m also new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 6/13/2017 9:11:00 PM

Thank you for your comment. I will be sure to check out your work. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2017 1:19:00 PM

- New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first beautiful poem, Andreanna :) - // Sun :)

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 6/7/2017 1:35:00 PM

I'm new as well... Thank you so much. I appreciate you. :)

Darren White

Date: 6/6/2017 1:29:00 AM

Eos, like a bird rising from the ashes :) Beautifully written, compact, full of imagery, great choice of words. Welcome to PoetrySoup!

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 6/7/2017 9:32:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. I truly appreciate your words and your warm welcome. Eos, is actually a Titan goddess of the dawn. This write was a challenge write about what city I am from. I am from Phoenix, Arizona. There are so many poems about the Phoenix I wanted to put a different twist on things. Thank you though for your kind words.